hurricane [3/?]

Nov 11, 2009 22:50

title: hurricane
author: hika_nishi
pairing: masuda/tegoshi
rating: pg-13
disclaimer: I own the computer I typed this on. That's it.
summary: Five years ago, he would have thought today was going to be terrible, but after what he’d been through, nothing in his life could be that bad, not out here in the real world.
note: sequel to Beautiful World. Most of ( Read more... )

p: tegoshi/masuda, series: beautiful world, ~johnnys

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shingung November 12 2009, 04:28:27 UTC
oh please don't tell me something bad happened to yuya...waahh...

that was a good cliffhanger...

waiting for the next chapter though i have a feeling it will be somehow makes me curse like massu..unless yuya tricked him again..but but....i gave up...

i will just wait for your next update...xD

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hika_nishi November 12 2009, 19:26:27 UTC
I wasn't originally going to end it with a cliffy, but I decided I liked it that way best XD makes people think until heads explode :o
Yuya wouldn't trick him like that...
thank you!♥

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eightroses November 12 2009, 05:04:46 UTC
D: that ending whyyyyyyy.
juuuust when you make me think its going to be good. LOL
excellent chapter! :D♥♥♥

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hika_nishi November 12 2009, 19:30:18 UTC
It was going to be an all happy chappy, but that all turned into a false security...
THANK YOU♥♥

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meli_29 November 12 2009, 06:15:56 UTC
“Aw, is Takahisa worried?”

yes... and maybe Melissa is too! hahaha xD omg, I'm thinking of all the bad possibilities, waaaah I'm really worried for Teshi, please~ please~ please~ he has to be fine♥
I don't want Massu get depressed again without him, I'm worried because they... survive once! when they were separated (well, we don't know how was Yuya but he waited, doesn he?) they survive... but they didn't learn, right?
oh god ¬¬ I know I'm going to cry if they are separated again

Thanks for the update dear♥
Waiting for the next part ^^ love u :D

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hika_nishi November 12 2009, 19:37:35 UTC
(i love your icon, is cute♥)

funny how that line ended foreshadowing the end in some way...
i don't know if they'd ever be okay without each other again, which is kind of sad.

(how Tego was during their separation would be an interesting side story :)
♥♥♥♥

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meli_29 November 13 2009, 04:56:50 UTC
(I know u_u I love my friend for made it to me xDDD)
no ;_; Tegoshi said it!! They belong to each other now, don't broke their heart...
wait, wait, wait....
what?! oh oh oh oh oh I predicted "THE END"?!
now I'm sure I'm going to cry...

oh god, I don't know if I can survive without tegomass happy ending but I'm reading you for ever(?), so... don't make me fell so bad xD.
haha kiding. Do it in your way xD I will love it.
:D kisses

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treegonometry November 12 2009, 06:50:14 UTC
[that they’re two mentally unstable people who find sanity in each other.
]
I really love this bit! It's just... somehow, really distinct. *doesn't make sense* <3

AHHHH A CLIFFIE D: I hope nothing bad happens to Tegoshi >________< Please, not the teacher not the teacher not the teacher DDDDDD:

Ohhhhhhhh tomapi? :DDDDD *bricked*

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hika_nishi November 12 2009, 19:41:01 UTC
that's one of those lines that I had in my head for a while (is that odd?) so I'm glad it stood out :D

maybe Tomapi XD

Thank you♥!

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treegonometry November 13 2009, 06:07:58 UTC
Nope, it's not weird at all ~! XDDDD I do that too XDD

Heeee <3

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yuukarin November 12 2009, 06:59:00 UTC
oh my god o_o
this is amazing
agree w/ tree...
"that they’re two mentally unstable people who find sanity in each other."
that line really killed me. its just..wow~ <33
oh shit, where's tegoshi ? ;-; I CAN ONLY EXPECT
...
;-;
thanks for this <333

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hika_nishi November 12 2009, 19:47:57 UTC
It makes me strangely happy that people noticed that line :D
Don't think too much about Tego, you might hurt yourself, too many bad options :(

THANK YOU♥♥

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