hurricane [11/12]

[starwithoutrain]

title: hurricane
author: hika_nishi
pairing: masuda/tegoshi
rating: pg-13
disclaimer: I own the computer I typed this on. That's it.
summary: Five years ago, he would have thought today was going to be terrible, but after what he’d been through, nothing in his life could be that bad, not out here in the real world.
note: sequel to Beautiful World. Most of

Comments

[yuukarin]

ASDFGHJK. not expecting this.
it always comes like a ninja, you know?
Shit! he shot himself? wow, was not expecting that, but its an absolutely AMAZING twist. This is great. I love that your thinking actually has a good follow through XD <3
when you say you're not happy with a chapter its always amazing, ftr. Stop worryiing so much ! <3
I'm so glad Ryo's back. SO GLAD.

and you've done it now.
You've really done it.
Listening to Tsubomi? HOW COULD YOU.
kobukuro's my favorite musical act EVER.
yes, EVER.
my ladders like...
massu -> kobukuro -> tegomass -> C-ute -> NEWS

if you catch my drift? XD

^ that all means I'm your official fangirl now.

the shock covers are hot. Nakki's mouth is adorable in the single V. just pointing that out.

&& thanks for this. <3 I can't believe another one is almost over.
I hope this isnt the last, too :P

[hika_nishi]

yay, I was shocking XD I had like five different ways that this could go down swirling around in my head and chose this at the last minute XD
ha, I'm overly critical of myself, I know this :|

lol. I've been on a major Kobukuro kick this week XD They're simply awesome♥
That list makes me love you more XD

the Shock covers are truly fierce

Thank you♥

[meli_29]

oh god... my heart stopped for a moment... god, god... is Yuya ok?! ah~ how it become to this?! that kid was so crazy, he was the one who needed to stay in the hospital! no tegomass. Killing himself... in front of Yuya, god what's wrong with him?! he really hated Teshi!
Our poor Yuya ;_;
Well, poor but... not all was bad for him, I mean... he has a incredible aniversary that continues until the next day xD, Ryo appear! (I love you!!) and... (?)...
and he has his Takahisa u_u! I couldn't want something more xD, but is a pity that maybe he'll be in pain for ever D;

I'm really curious about next chapter! what will happend with Ryo, Shige and Tegomass is killing me xD thank you dear~

“Hey, we all knew you were kissing friends, It’s a big jump between that and fuck buddies.” → haha xD this is so Ryo~

[hika_nishi]

He was a deeply messed up kid, he really did deserve to be in that hospital. I figured doing that would show just how much he hated Tego... But, yes, at least they had a nice anniversary.
Ryo's back♥
THANKS DEAR~♥♥

[shingung]

like masuda i thought yuya died too...but but but....the kid shot himself infront of yuya...that kid is so sick....

Masuda stokes Yuya’s hair gently. “It’s okay, baby. It’s all over now.” Somehow, looking at Yuya’s face, he doesn’t believe it’s totally true. --->waahhh on this line...

looking forward on how you will let this end....xD

[hika_nishi]

I guess being a generally sick person runs in that family...

Thank you♥!

[yumiko_okahawa]

And what did he say before he shot himself? I bet he made Yuya feel bad, accusing him for something again >.<
I am glad it wasn't Yuya being shot, but then again, I feel that person did something really bad to him and Yuya will need his Massu now to overcome it ;___;
Lucky, Tomohisa is such an loyal friend that he made Massu follow them.

I love this, I don't want this to end, but if it has, please let it end happily ;_; *hopes*

*snuggles*
♥♥♥♥♥

[hika_nishi]

Whatever he said, only Yuya knows now...but yeah, it's along those lines. He definitely needs his Massu now, just like Pi said he would.
It's going to be sad not to have this fic to write anymore...
Thank you!
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[momonyan]

I got so acared there for a moment, I thought Tegoshi would die >________< Thank god he didn't...
Waaaaaaah, this is amazing, as usual! I really love it, especially the fluff at the beginning <33 And then it became all angsty again...just great! This totally made my morning, now I have strength for school^^

[hika_nishi]

I didn't think that tiny part would scare people so much...but Tego's fine, at least physically.
yay, Thank You♥♥