hurricane [12/12]

[starwithoutrain]

title: hurricane
author: hika_nishi
pairing: masuda/tegoshi
rating: pg-13
disclaimer: I own the computer I typed this on. That's it.
summary: Five years ago, he would have thought today was going to be terrible, but after what he’d been through, nothing in his life could be that bad, not out here in the real world.
note: sequel to Beautiful World. Most of

Comments

[faith_alive]

Actually the lovely people above have said all that I wanted to say about this chapter
That the moments when Yuya came out of his shell, first when Massu fainted and then when he wished Massu a happy birthday, were perfectly picked
Massu fearing that Yuya could end up back in the institution brings us back (with a pang) to how they started out in the first place
This whole fic, including beautiful world, is like a lovely piece of dark chocolate; bittersweet but addictive
Thank you and I look forward to your next work :) (yeay for the prospect of Kinki)

[hika_nishi]

I'm glad people liked Yuya's happy birthday and it wasn't just me and my sappiness that thought it was a perfect time XD
I like that chocolate metaphor :)
Thank you♥♥♥

[animesempaigirl]

YATTA! NISHIKATO ACTION!!!

Thank you so much for writing this story. I was so happy that you were doing a sequel and I was even happier that Ryo and Shige GOT IT ON! lol

Old crime dramas are my favs. I'm writing one just like that right now. It's Ohmiya from Arashi though so yeah lol

[hika_nishi]

haha, Nishikato♥
Crime drama is fun to write, but I feel like you really need to think everything out beforehand and I'm so bad at that XD
THANK YOU~♥♥

[wennqq]

Your fics are awesome! ♥

[hika_nishi]

:D Thank you! ♥♥

[tylika]

love this fic love this fic !!*________*

[hika_nishi]

I'm glad :)
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Thank you~

[shingung]

congrats! another beautiful story was finished by yours...*gives you flowers*

i was glad it was a happy ending..because i am actually scared because yuya was not talking then takahisa was even fired from his job..but i am glad everything turned out fine..

so special that the first word yuya spoke was greeting takahisa happy birthday..xD

thanks thanks again for this beautiful story...xD

[hika_nishi]

It makes me so happy to see people use a word like "beautiful" to describe my story, especially after I thought I was writing this chap crapily XD
I was tempted to do the sad send-Yuya-away ending, but I prefer sweet romance like him being able to tell Massu happy birhtday XD
Thank You~♥♥♥♥