decay [3/3]
title: decay
author: hika_nishi
pairing: masuda/tegoshi
rating: pg-13
disclaimer: I own the computer I typed this on. That's it.
summary: He ducks under the designated police line, people in uniforms standing around under the streetlamp, a young girl laying face down on the sidewalk.
Previous: Part 01 Part 02
( It’s almost poetic )
author: hika_nishi
pairing: masuda/tegoshi
rating: pg-13
disclaimer: I own the computer I typed this on. That's it.
summary: He ducks under the designated police line, people in uniforms standing around under the streetlamp, a young girl laying face down on the sidewalk.
Previous: Part 01 Part 02
( It’s almost poetic )
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awesomeness.
i like the part wherein from yuya's notes they figured something out...it excited me waiting on how they will execute...
i love your writing and i love you of course...
and yuya always get the part of to became hostage hehehehe...you're mean to yuya...kidding...but i am sure its okay coz you always had masuperman to the rescue and the happy ending...xD..always sweet...
thanks again....keep it up *thumbs up*
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Thank you muchly♥♥♥
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"no, I'm not ready for this"
and had half a mind to put it off until tomorrow. I WAS SO SCARED LOL. on edge. Like, I've never felt like that for a FANFIC before.
be proud o-o this is absolutely fantastic, absolutely.
you didnt kill him, omg.
thank you thank you.
;-; <3 thank you.
the emotions massu went through
you got them perfect <3
the way he snapped at konkon and then apologized like that was really easy to imagine...
and omg maiha
when she said she couldn't talk to him because he was a dirty homosexual, gayness being his sin.
I hurt for him o_o
I love the ending
it was happy
tegoshi's alive
in massu's arms. yea happy.
thank you so so so so much for this. <3 it was so fantastically written... agh.
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I knew you'd glad when Tego didn't die :)
seriously, thank you♥♥♥
(btw, I am impatiently waiting for you to post something new. Just thought I'd say that XD)
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thanks for sharing~
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Thank You♥♥
(omg your icon XD major lolz)
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Masuda's emotions... you described his feelings beautifully.
but his brain works even in that cruel situation.
uknow, when you said that you were inspired by Se7en, I thought that it would be bad for me to read something with the plot that I already know.
but I was wrong. your story has another... "color", I think. it's brighter, and not only because of tegomasu's happy ending. like, the original looks like deep night or gloomy twilight while yours is like sunset, when sun is still shining a little. idk how to say it, lol.
well, your story is better I think xD
and there's no rain.
it's awesome.
♥♥♥
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haha, I would never base something totally on an existing plot, that's not so fun. And I don't think I'm that dark XD
Thank you so very much♥♥
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Ueda????? MY fairy boy? Nooo, you really have a thing against my boys, don't you? XD
Sho, Ueda, well.. tegsohi XD At least you let two of them just suffer, while you amde the other one a crazy killer AND killed him in the end.
*cries*
No, I'm okay. ..... *sobs*Ueda*sobs*
It was amazing, though, of course *_*// Is there anything between Ryo and Konno? there was, wasn't there? XD
I am so glad Tegoshi could be saved, and I think it#s even better that not actually Massu but Ryo did it and that Massu was so messed up over all this.
Haaah.
It truely was a lovely and exciting read and when I saw this posted I wasn't sure if I really wanted to read it, suddenly. I know I've been whining the past three days for you to finish it <.< But then, when i saw you did, I was afriad of what was coming ( ... )
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lol. no, there's nothing between them. completely professional XD
Massu doesn't seem like someone that would take that risk, Ryo seems like he would though XD
I promise, I'll never let Ueda die again :)
Thank You~♥♥♥♥
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