22 Days

[stayclassyboy]

Brendon&Ryan // 430 words // pg // for 10 Nov 09

Posted to we_are_cities

Comments

[heartequals]

this is gorgeoussss. i adore the line about the waitress in particular -- what a great moment

[stayclassyboy]

Thankyou <3
I had to add something in there about an old woman and her stories. I love when you meet people and they tell you about when they were small, they make you think if things that had never before crossed your mind :)

[fantasylandx3]

as i said before i love it it's really cute (:
thank you for showing me this site beau xo

[stayclassyboy]

<3
You're welcome, wac makes me swoon.

[takkatakkatakka]

I especially liked this I'm breathing brine and Ryan won't stop smiling. Niiiice. :)

[stayclassyboy]

Thankyou :)

[killtherest]

I love the start, how he introduces himself.
I'd love to come on a trip like this, sounds beautiful!
This line is my favourite:
"Nobody cares that we look too young to be on our own, nobody cares where we're from or who we are, they just don't want us to pay and leave them alone."
(Except the last part's a little confusing, do they or don't they want them to pay?)

[stayclassyboy]

Thankyou <3 So much.

It was supposed to be "Nobody cares that we look too young to be on our own, nobody cares where we're from or who we are, they just want us to pay and leave them alone." I made a typo :P

I'm actually really happy with this piece. I'm showing it to my boyfriend tomorrow (it's the first thing of mine he'll read and I'm nervous)

[killtherest]

Ah okay, that makes a bit more sense.

Oooh that's a bit of a milestone, I'm sure Alex(?) will enjoy reading it as much as I did ;)

[killtherest]

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