Comments | stayfarawyclose: I let you go, I let you in.

stayfarawyclose

I let you go, I let you in.

Oct 04, 2004 01:31

I hate air conditioners. They produce stale, tasteless air. But I hate feeling hot and sweaty more. So for two weeks, I had been suffering through recycled oxygen.

It was mid-afternoon on a Sunday and I had been putting off my homework all weekend. But it was a good day. For the first time I had been here in Lynchburg, it was cool outside. To say ( Read more... )

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sherrifflucy October 4 2004, 10:02:45 UTC

Are you going to liberty? Is that why you're in lynchburg? Or do you go to lynchburg College?

stayfarawyclose October 4 2004, 10:23:47 UTC

Yeah, I'm going to liberty.

lilmez October 4 2004, 15:42:34 UTC

lol "going to" liberty.
that was really really good. i got into it, then noticed it must be your paper. AND YOU USED BANG!
*is pleased of herself for initiating the idea*
im goin got call you after i eat dinner.
im the daughter of a grammar nazi, so dont take this wrong. but keep in mind that the presence needs to stay the same thoughout the piece all past-tense or all present tense.
BUT HOLY CRAP.
that was great. espically the sleeping giants part.
cant wait to talk to you!

stayfarawyclose October 4 2004, 17:04:18 UTC

Yeah, I realize now about the consistent voice, keeping it past or present.

:D

I got a 98% on that paper. WEEE.

wow. churchpunk07 October 5 2004, 13:16:00 UTC

that was beautiful, Benji. i wish i could write like that. quite a talent you have, kid. you should write a song about that lol. in Christ,
.larissa.