fic: Put Your Back In It (Chanyeol/Tao, NC-17)

[staygame]

Put Your Back In It
EXO, Chanyeol/Tao, NC-17, 3900 words

Friends with benefits, except without the friends part. Or as summarized by the person without whom I wouldn't get anything done, avirjin: "chanyeol wants that dick, but not the boy attached to that dick."

Vietnamese translation by a kind reader.

(Warnings: homophobic language in one scene.)

Comments

[staygame]

i was too lazy for a lulzy bonus scene so avirjin wrote it for me;

bonus ending "a few months down the line and multiple sleepovers later, chanyeol lets tao rest his head on his chest and trace annoyingly gentle swirls down his arms in peace. then he realizes with some alarm that their breathing is in sync and thinks 'wtf when the fuck did this happen' before roughly shoving tao off. the end."

[avirjin]

HOW DARE YOU INCLUDE THAT WHEN YOU HAD YOUR OWN POST-FIC SCENE SUMMARIZED IN WHICH CHANYEOL ELBOWS TAO IN THE TEETH AFTER HE POPS THE QUESTION. HOW. DARE. YOU.

[staygame]

because yours is funnier duh

[avirjin]

Why do you insist on lying to yourself ;;

[idolkiller]

^my tru feelings about u
/spitefully reads this instead of doing my case

crying at this beautiful intro, BAEKHYUN SCREAM and tao alksdjlakdjf "I just feel like we could be friends, you know?" ACTUALLY FUCK YOU WAY TO PUNCH ME IN THE FACE WITHIN THE FIRST LIKE MINUTE "It's so cute that you guys are friends now," Baekhyun says genuinely. / Chanyeol bristles at that too. UGH I HATEY OU i don't really know where to start bc i suddenly have so many feelings about this ship all at once and you just EVOKED ALL OF THEM lakdlghaklsdfj god i hate (love) that dangle of friendship between them, the irony of it is almost cruel alkdshgaldsjf CHANTAO THIS FUCKING PERFECT PUSH-PULL SHIP

Chanyeol has only done this for older guys who pulled on his hair and fucked his mouth with no regard for his gag reflex. Comparatively, [...] He doesn't need Zitao of all people to treat him tenderly. um wow this unf sly backward peek?! tell me more pls staygame. ALSO I LOVE THAT i love that that is one of the things that annoys chanyeol the most about tao

[idolkiller]

as he considers dipping his finger inside without any lube, just to fuck with Zitao. He doesn't. / the desire to pin him down and fuck him right there in front of everyone hits him like a punch to the gut. I REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS, idk i love the idea of chanyeol who thinks of and is tempted to do all these violent humiliating things that he'd never actually carry out--bc i mean he's still a good guy with a healthy conscience, he has consideration, it's just TAO WHO DRIVES HIM UP THE WALL UNLIKE ANYONE ELSE DOES ad he has a temper and he thinks of all these gut-instinct awful things he wants to cut his teeth on but then i mean they're also the kind of things that would become sickly horrible the moment they became reality so He doesn't want to hurt Zitao. Or maybe he does, but not like this, not when Zitao isn't trying to hurt him back. ugh i love them i love them

"Yeah, and I told them how you came in my mouth." / "I told them," this comment is too fucking long and boring for life so very briefly: I LOVE TAO, I LOVE HOW OPEN AND

[staygame]

omg i'm just going to say thank you because i don't even know how to respond to this much praise i am so verklempt ;~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~;

[hipployta]

Umm...isn't that love rage? I don't know how to tell you this Chanyeol but you seem to be a tsundere heavy on the tsun tsun who cannot handle his Zitao feels from DAY ONE

You think you both want Baekhyun and Kris but you're also angry at Zitao for smiling at Baekhyun or using Kris' mannerisms and you are HIGHLY aware of him...that's a hint (OT4 hint as well)

[staygame]

yes ot4 hints because i am a baektao/taoris shipper too lol ;~; tao deserves everyone's love! thank you for commenting ♥

[g_odalisque13]

Because no one would dislike Tao.
trufax

this pairing fascinates me to no end. and this was a different take than i've read before (not that there are many fics about them ;;)
the contrast in their personalities and how that impacted the way they dealt with one another was great
and i am convinced that chanyeol will admit to tao's flawlessness eventually and then somehow baektaorisyeol will happen b/c ot4
i really loved this!

edit: and chanyeol's porn guessing talent is epic.you could probably write a whole fic about chanyeol's super power XD

[staygame]

yessss my sweet ot4, that's a little too many dicks in one fic for me to handle but i hope someone writes it someday!

thank you for reading and commenting :D

[sydneycarts]

...S///CREAM

THESE ARE ALL MY FEELINGS ARTICULATED IN PORN ♥♥♥♥♥ A+++++

[staygame]

ehehehehe ♥