Sunset

[steiner_boy]

try to catch a sunset

Comments

[flegfly]

Hey, ya know, you could also put these up somewhere like deviant art, or summink. Hmm?

[endeared_one]

this annalyzes your feelings of lose and despair at the moment. funny you used a sunset for the image of it. most people use sand and or water to objectify their thoughts of pain....

"and when you look back
all traces of beauty are gone

where the sky was once on fire with passion and glory
now only black rolling clouds remain."

this part especially symbolizes your realization that things cant be contained in the boxes you want them in for the time you require them to stay for you. you want it heated up all the time but it cant be that way and as soon as your comfortable enough to look away because you think it will always be there it slips away and your at a loss for thought cuz you cant fathom how it was you let it go when you were clearly holding on so tight. or maybe thats the problem?

[blink_me88]

oh....dan.....what mnore is there to say you know how it is.