Let me fall, forget me not

Aug 21, 2005 03:29

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stilettojean August 21 2005, 18:18:08 UTC
Every poem you pen here... (with apparent ease) you twist words, paint vast mental images, manage to awaken nostolgia, shift my emotions, and charge my intellect...

You have undeniable talent. You need to copywrite your words, and share them with a wider audience.

--Josia

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stiletostaccato August 24 2005, 08:08:48 UTC
I hope these women your rowing your vessel of love towards truly deserve what you could and would willfully bring them.

Feel free to dock your boat at my shoreline of lust anytime before I leave for Los Angeles and I'll drop my anchor into your portcullis.

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stellarpneuma August 27 2005, 00:17:13 UTC
Avast- my beaten and wretched ship has been thrust upon your silky shore; battered and worn I emerge into the night. I can hear your breathing but I cannot feel you just yet..wont you come a little closer?

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