These chapters (as I have outlined them so far -- this changes as I fill it in, sometimes) -- are short enough that I hope to be able to update them more often.
I am *thrilled* to see the start of a new fic!!!! I have been feeling anxious, since the conclusion of the last one...there weren't any firm promises for more Sharkverse, and I was (very) worried that there might be a dry spell.
So (very) many wonderful lines in this chapter. The conversation between Wilson, April and Cuddy regarding the rat is *brilliant*.
...But it is nonetheless left in the dust by the conversation between House, Rachel and Cuddy over the car. Once again, you manage to show (and not tell) exactly how spectacularly wonderfully House parents Rachel, by involving her in his world, and not making any concessions. And I love the dry humour.
The way you finally explain why House is not kissing Cuddy is wonderfully sensitive: the handing over of the medicine was incredibly effective.
THANK YOU for starting this new story. I'm hoping for lots of episodes!
House is both answering Cuddy's questions, and letting her in -- but only so far, because he's also showing that he doesn't want o explain or talk about any more than absolutely necessary -- by giving her the meds.
It absolutely made my morning to see this post on my friends page. There's a lot to love in this little chapter. Wilson, April and the rat was hysterical, the image of House and Rachel at the car was sweet, and the scenario you've set up with House and Cuddy was brilliantly done, on all fronts.
Thanks for sharing and, as always, looking forward to the rest as it comes.
Knowing you, 'no sex' doesn't mean that it won't be mind-blowingly erotic. That is, if both of them get their heads out of their backsides.
I shall definitely try. But if they both get their heads out of their backsides and start communicating clearly, what's left to write about? ;)
They're still screwed up and immature, but in this 'verse they're not satisfied to leave it at that. There's stuff to get through, and they work through it.
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So (very) many wonderful lines in this chapter. The conversation between Wilson, April and Cuddy regarding the rat is *brilliant*.
...But it is nonetheless left in the dust by the conversation between House, Rachel and Cuddy over the car. Once again, you manage to show (and not tell) exactly how spectacularly wonderfully House parents Rachel, by involving her in his world, and not making any concessions. And I love the dry humour.
The way you finally explain why House is not kissing Cuddy is wonderfully sensitive: the handing over of the medicine was incredibly effective.
THANK YOU for starting this new story. I'm hoping for lots of episodes!
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“Stop trying to diagnose the vermin!”
Cuddy noting every missed kiss. Fang and her Dad.
Thank you!
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Thanks for sharing and, as always, looking forward to the rest as it comes.
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I shall definitely try. But if they both get their heads out of their backsides and start communicating clearly, what's left to write about? ;)
They're still screwed up and immature, but in this 'verse they're not satisfied to leave it at that. There's stuff to get through, and they work through it.
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