First Zo/San fic to see the light of day

[stephaniecmc]

Title: Glimmer
Rating: R
Pairing: Zoro/Sanji
Spoiler/Warning: Zoro’s 36 Pound Hou from Skypeia? Fluff. Crack. OOC.
Summary: Zoro gets all the attention, Sanji becomes pouty.
Word count: 1180
Disclaimer: Mine? Mine? Mine? Most definitely not.
A/N: I’m sorry!! I know I write horribly!! I made everyone OOC!! It’s my fault!! I should be kicked and

Comments

[onyx_shinigami]

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[stephaniecmc]

Arigatou! *gives onyx_shinigami a Sanji-shaped cookie*

[onyx_shinigami]

*lol* Thanks. ^^

[afterburn]

*fangirl squeal*
I don't see what you were distressed over this! It was really funny. And so incredibly cute. *L*
Zoro’s ring shone as his fingers laced with Sanji’s.
Kyaaaaaaa~!

[stephaniecmc]

o.o ZOMG!! You LIKED it?!
*Chopper-mode* It doesn't make me happy that you like it! It doesn't, you nutcase! No way! *wibble*

Thanks, though...Thank God nobody decided that I should be banned from the Internet for this *_*

[afterburn]

Why wouldn't I like it? It was seriously funny! the idea of Zoro's fanclub was really original and clever. I'm also part of that club.

Naaahhh you won't be banned from the internet just yet. ;D
Keep writing though!

[stephaniecmc]

Hehehe...Glad you liked it! I have always been toying about the idea of a woman attack on Zoro. In which his utterly in denialgay self wouldn't know what to do. Kill them all? Or tease Sanji with it? =D

[stalkerbunny]

Yes, a ship full of Zoro fangirls...^_^ GREAT idea (cough, where can I join?). I didn't think they were out of character either (the strawhats, that is...well, not the fangirls either ;), so keep writing (and good luck on that). Oh, and I particulary liked Zoro's note, very romantic, in his own way...*snicker* zoromantic?

[stephaniecmc]

ehehehehehe...thanks!

And here I was, bracing myself for hailstones and hellfire...I'm glad you liked it...And all these nice comments made we wibbly and flappy!!
*dances*

[ahja_reyn]

(snickers) I like the idea of Chopper asking to buy a pair of Zoro's underwear...

[stephaniecmc]

hahaha...we all know how much Chopper is in lust withadmires Zoro XP
His repeated leaps into Zoro's face is just screaming "@#$%$ me! Who cares about Sanji! #@%$@# ME!!"
*killed by Horn Point*

[plotbunny_tiff]

Ahh. This made me giggle! ^_^

And don't be so hard on yourself. You should continue to write. Words are life, and you have a wonderful grasp on dynamic conversation. ^_^

Honestly the only concrit I can think of is to be wary of too much P.O.V. switching. It can be a bit jarring. Otherwise, wonderful stuff!

Besides...it's nice to see Zoro get a bit of in-story womanly attention once in a while.

[stephaniecmc]

zomg!! you liked it!! THANK YOU!!! kyaa~~!! And I read loads of your fics *squee*

Mmm...yeah.. I got confused sometimes as well..I'd write and go "Who am I writing about again?" *hides face*

Thanks for the concrit. I'll keep that in mind, if I should ever attempt another fic *_*