"Naked" by: Stephanie Denise

[stephaniedenise]

unraveling of pained memories
she lies there naked
among the crimson crimes against her
she lies there naked
among the raped and totured soul that is her flesh
she lies there naked
among the mortal wounds and self brutality
she lies there naked
among the unknown and surreal
she lies there...
naked.

Comments

[skitzodivagurl]

wow. ur very talented at poetry. it moves me. WOW. good job.

[stephaniedenise]

awww thank you hun!

[the_wise_wyn]

hmm. Nice and... naked.
Don't think I'm being sarcastic (I get that a lot but I never am) because I'm not being sarcastic, I like it. Its deep and dark and thats something I really enjoy in a poem. By the way do you think its possible that I could convince you to read some of your stuff at AMPS. The Art Music Poetry Society, we have a meeting this Wednesday and would love it if you could come and present some of your poetry.
No this is not an advertisment, I mean it. Besides since your a fellow student of Moorpark why not come and present it to your peers and others in the creative community, and I still haven't met you face to face.
Later
~Wyn

[the_wise_wyn]

I forgot to ask, Where you there for the show? Because if you were you may have been confused. I asked them to use my pen name (Wyn) but they instead refered to me as David. So if you were there great if you weren't oh well. Anyway have a nice day

[linnahiril]

Interesting poem. And I'm not being sarcastic, I really mean it. It is rather unusual, at least to me, and you make a very good use of imagery. The visual images stand out very strongly and vividly. Keep at it. ^_^