I woke up in the middle of the night to write this...

Jun 18, 2004 09:55

I WILL learn an instrument and make this a song ( Read more... )

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robpro June 18 2004, 07:09:18 UTC
thats deep. I think I get the entire allegory.

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itzmattu June 18 2004, 08:29:09 UTC
Hey, that's not half bad. If you really want to make it a song though you might have to fit more versus together to make them longer. Unless of course you want the versus that short, it's your song. I could work something out for you if you wanted to make it a song. Then we could make a music video and omg. It would be AMC-rific.

Anyways though, good work for me never really reading any poetry you've written before.

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stephen27 June 18 2004, 08:56:18 UTC
yeah i know the verses are kinda short. But what I'd do is add in sick guitar riffs in between and stuff and yeah...lol. thanks tho!

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