[Requiem - Johanna] January 26th, 2008 - Heart's Blood

[stephs_stories]

The limp body curled in her arms. The hair still smelled of cinnamon and youth as it draped across her shoulder. She murmured softly, a gentle lullaby to sooth the departed. The pungent, sweet smell of death and blood perfumed the air. It was morbid and beautiful, a site of compassion and depravity

Comments

[diary_invidia]

she comforted ears that could no longer hear

That is a fantastic line. It's so nice to see these little moments. Well done.

[angelsamael]

I second that sentiment.
Damn fine piece.

[riksowden]

I do like your writing, thats really good stuff - short, but full of punch. Thumbs up from me!

Let me know if you want (and have time) to scene, i know you're really busy mind.