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A Whole New World - Part 6

Apr 09, 2011 11:08

Title: A Whole New World
Author: Steve_Ski
Pairing: Ryan/Other
Word Count: About 17,000

Summary:
The final chapter in the world where Ryan’s being dragged out of the closet once he moves to Newport. Thanks to Brandywine for the prompt. I miss her stuff and would so like to see an update or two on some old stories. …

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whole new world

Comments 5

chrisear April 10 2011, 12:29:59 UTC

great update

60schic April 11 2011, 01:05:38 UTC

Wonderful ending. I love it when things turn out schmoopy!

steve_ski April 11 2011, 01:29:16 UTC

Schmoopy...like that term :)

Yeah, I like a happy ending. Ryan just deserves the happy ending, even if its not with Seth....

sdlucly April 17 2011, 20:54:21 UTC

I've been grinning like an idiot, the last half an hour that it took me to read the whole thing. *giggles* Very, very cute.

Also, reading this story, made me remember that I once had an idea that when Ryan left Chino (and took his bike and everything), he also took with him his two year old sister (child of Dawn and AJ) and dude, I never got around to writing that! His life would have been a million times different, if he had that responsibility with him, right? *giggles madly*

steve_ski April 18 2011, 13:32:46 UTC

Since I've spent many a hour reading (and often re-reading) your stuff I'm glad you liked it. I'm a sucker for a happy ending for Ryan.

This is only my second story and I've learned how hard it is to complete one of these so I have a lot more respect for those authors who manage to consistently finish their stories (still get frustrated when I get involved in a story and it just ends though....)

I can see him being unable to leave another victim for AJ so yeah if there was a little one he'd just have to take her with him. Can see two versions. One where he never meets the Cohen's and struggles a lot more and of course the happier ending where he runs into Seth somehow and they all eventually end up together (of course there would have to be just a little angst before the happier ending)