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[stevehtx]

Found a fragment of a story I had started long ago. Having opened it, a passing Muse sat on my shoulder long enough to finish it then flitted away, I guess to inspire someone else.

No inspiration on the title though.

Title: Unnamed
Pairing: E/J
Rating: G
Disclaimer: All credit to Annie Proulx

Comments

[dreamer1lfr]

What a great surprise to see this today! I haven't read any J & E for months, and this is a nice visit back. As always, you've perfectly captured Ennis' inner struggle with his feelings for Jack, and Jack's loving patience in helping him come around to acceptance of it.

I'm glad your muse stopped by, if only for awhile. I've missed your writing. :)

[boo_boo_cat]

Ennis reached up and took Jack’s hand drawing it down closer to his chest, holding it with both hands for comfort, to reassure himself that Jack was there and wasn’t going anywhere.

Really beautiful story!

[blackbird_y]

Beautiful.

ccasionally his training from childhood would rear its head and he’d storm around cussing Jack to hell or worse for bringing this…thing…on him, this pain, this longing, this need that he’d never known he had…a need no real man should ever have rise inside him…a need to haunt him and twist his thoughts and feelings around.

Ennis, it's called being in love and could have happened just the same if you hadn't been gay.. ;)

Nev