An exercise in being concise.

Jun 11, 2009 14:43

            “What the hell are you doing?”

The blinds clacked shut as she turned around to her boyfriend. He reminded her remarkably of her mother, with the way his hands were on his hips, his indignant expression. “I was looking out the window.”

“We were told not to do that.” He grabbed her upper arm gently, and steered ( Read more... )

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angeleyes8410 June 18 2009, 19:08:20 UTC
That's awesome!

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stevie_roch June 18 2009, 19:10:38 UTC
Thank you! I got your Myspace message yesterday, I didn't respond right away because I'm fighting a cold. But I want to say thank you for the apology, and I wanted to offer one of my own. I think we were both in a position where we fed off each others depression and made it worse for each other. I'm glad you're in a much better place now.

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angeleyes8410 June 18 2009, 19:15:46 UTC
Thank you very much. I think you are exactly right ... We were both just in really bad places and it just didn't create a good mix.

I haven't talked to you in forever. How are you doing? You're all done with BA right? What's your plans after?

P.S I have cold too! I've this mother for about a month and I want to reach inside my body and pull out my insides. I hope yours is better :)

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angeleyes8410 June 18 2009, 19:17:07 UTC
P.P.S I want to read more things!

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Can't wait to make a contribution anonymous April 13 2011, 19:09:55 UTC
Hi - I am really happy to find this. cool job!

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