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Jul 17, 2012 08:10


Title: The Creature from Cardiff Bay

Author: stevwil

Disclaimer: They're not mine. I'm just playing with them.

Rating: R for language

Characters: Jack/Ianto, Tosh, Owen, Gwen

Summary: More fun with alien stuff!

A/N: There is some light Gwen bashing. I'll apologize in advance but you have been warned. See the note at the end of the story if you want to ( Read more... )

darkman, r, torchwood

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mamaduck46 July 17 2012, 12:54:15 UTC
And my dear, it worked so well. Great Job!!

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stevwil41 July 17 2012, 21:14:28 UTC
Thank you! I was iffy on whether it worked or not. I'm glad you liked it.

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iantojjackh July 17 2012, 13:51:43 UTC
I'm with Ianto, should have shot her.

Laughed through most of this. Excellent job.

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stevwil41 July 17 2012, 21:15:35 UTC
Thank you! I wanted it to come off as amusing but wasn't sure if I could manage it. I can BE funny but a lot of that involves delivery. Writing funny seems to be way harder. I'm glad you enjoyed.

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lilferret July 17 2012, 21:50:54 UTC
It WAS fun! But dammit. I kinda wish Ianto had shot her.

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stevwil41 July 18 2012, 00:18:12 UTC
Thank you. He almost grazed her but I was feeling mellow at the time. Although that could change if LJ doesn't straighten up and let me post this to jackxianto. I've been trying all evening. I may go back and shoot Gwen just to release some stress and then blame it on computer problems rather than just being kind of petty:)

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lilferret July 18 2012, 04:40:54 UTC
*snorts loudly* Do it.

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badly_knitted July 18 2012, 14:29:44 UTC
LMAO! Like Ianto, I would have been tempted to shoot - just to slow her down, you understand.

Interesting to 'see' the mysterious shadowy man again. Wonder where he's going off to if he's going to be gone for a bit. Jack had better be careful not to get into any more predicaments until shadow man gets back.

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stevwil41 July 18 2012, 20:48:49 UTC
I totally understand. So does Tosh. Jack'll be fine. Jack's always fine. It makes him a little difficult to write in these action stories but does give me an excuse to tie him up now and again:)

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iantosdreamer46 July 18 2012, 19:11:43 UTC
Can I please come and reload the gun for Ianto? He should have done it. Loved it again, but am wondering who that mystery person is. You have me thinking and believe me it's not good for me to think *giggles*. Can't wait for the next one.

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stevwil41 July 18 2012, 20:51:40 UTC
It was fun to joke about and he did shoot Owen but still I think I'll leave her alone for now. As annoying as I find the whole thing, ultimately Ianto had Jack and Gwen didn't. Plus, the corner of fandom that I choose to inhabit pretty much guarentees that it'll stay that way:)

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