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stilettoxmafia

My Favorite Game [3/?]

Sep 04, 2011 14:37

My Favorite Game [3/?]Pairing: Belldom
Rating: PG13 for now
Type: AU
Summary: Matt and Dom have a lot of history between them including a couple of countries and brushes with the law.
Feedback: Yes, I will really need it for this. I welcome the critical.
Disclaimer: None of this ever happened. The story belongs to me, but the real people do not. No ( Read more... )

fic: my favorite game, belldom

Comments 44

shiner1 September 4 2011, 23:02:19 UTC

I love this! Who am I kidding, I love all the stuff you do. But I really do like the glimpses back and forth on the timeline.

stilettoxmafia September 4 2011, 23:06:51 UTC

Thank you, that is really kind of you to say!

I'm happy you're following the story and enjoying the scattered nature.

muse_manticore September 4 2011, 23:33:22 UTC

Aww I pulled this face O.O when I saw how sad Matt was and awww.

I love this, it's killing me but I can't stop reading it.

*snuggs*

stilettoxmafia September 5 2011, 00:21:24 UTC

I feel bad its making everyone so sad!

I'm glad you are enjoying it, though!

muse_manticore September 5 2011, 09:30:41 UTC

We're all incurable romantics (that's code for pervs) and want to see them happy together. (code for banging away) rofl.

Yep. bring on the crumpet!

stilettoxmafia September 5 2011, 15:56:39 UTC

Well this is me writing this....so.... ;)

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millionstar September 5 2011, 00:17:52 UTC

Addicted to this fic. Great work, girl!

stilettoxmafia September 5 2011, 00:27:51 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad it is being enjoyed.

l_starlight_13 September 5 2011, 01:39:36 UTC

“Just...kiss him already,” he whispered to himself in the dark.
Awww the flashbacks are so cute :3 :3

Reality is a bit heartbreaking... But I'll be looking forward to Matt's plan of attack for getting Dom back :)
Awesome writing as per usual <3

stilettoxmafia September 5 2011, 01:55:05 UTC

I really do feel bad these bits have been so sad.

They are cute things, though...

Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

ashamedbliss September 5 2011, 10:47:17 UTC

'The Raven', how brilliant :3

I adore this, I love the layout and how things are gradually revealed, gah it's incredible :3 please, keep going :D *hugs tight* ♥

stilettoxmafia September 5 2011, 15:58:08 UTC

Thank you. The Raven for a name just kinda randomly came to me.

I'm still going, slowly chipping away at more. I think my time line is doing fine, but I have my chart to log it all.

ashamedbliss September 5 2011, 17:21:03 UTC

Ooh, interesting! I'd definitely need a chart too, with something like this :')

stilettoxmafia September 6 2011, 01:21:52 UTC

It should be calming down soon enough so you don't need a chart :)