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still_ciircee

Fic for Rainbowfilling

Sep 02, 2011 00:49

I meant to post this sooner than this. >.< Failure, thy name is Circe. I love you guys. I'll get back to you tomorrow (or Saturday).

For now:

Title: MomoMasaki and the Journey to the West
Rated: G
Warning: None?
Pairing: Aimiya with hints of Aiba/Jun?
Prompt: Fairy Tale AU
Summary: Putting Aiba in a giant peach can't really lead to any good ( Read more... )

au, rarepairbingo, arashi

Comments 6

faiee September 2 2011, 06:33:45 UTC

I enjoyed reading this a lot! The sort of cross between Journey to the West, and Roald Dahl and Arashi had me grinning all the way.

Putting Aiba in a giant peach would have never led to much good. But when it's Sho who puts said Aiba in said peach, it's doomed. For greater things like destiny and Nino. In that particular way Sho fails and succeed all at the same time.

And I liked that Nino just never got to go on the trip. It was kind of unexpected (since most Arashi fics rarely leave out only 1 member, if any at all) but really sweet at the end.

lianne29 September 2 2011, 07:46:24 UTC

On one of my classes, we watched a YT clip of Momotaro and I remember that peach. (and the song)XD

Aiba being inside the peach fits. And I agree with your summary. Aiba in a peach will only lead to unexpected but happy things XD

Aiba/Nino were cute especially the last part.

nekochan_lia September 2 2011, 10:19:27 UTC

oh my.. i love it
aimiya is <3

aoisoranohikari September 2 2011, 14:19:15 UTC

In the end Aiba decided even though he'd been destined to be sent to Jun it was not necessarily his destiny to reach him. He had found Nino and fate, it seemed, had found them both. <- Really!!! I love these sentences so much!!
Nice fic! I love it!! XDD

tangiblewhimsy September 3 2011, 01:03:27 UTC

This entire thing had me thinking of James And The Giant Peach, but not because the stories were at all similar.

I loved the really fairy tale tone you kept throughout the entire thing. A lot of people can start out good with the tone but then it just falls into a rather bland sort of light tone. This stayed whimsical without losing track the entire way through.

NOT TO MENTION IT WAS ADORABLE! OMG, did I spazz about adorable? Because sdklad. Aiba being so excited to go and find Jun, thinking about how wonderful it was going to be and how happy they'd be. And then Nino scoops his peach out of the river and life just takes him down a completely different path. I love the line about "I'll take your smile with me" while promising to come back. And I love that Nino wasn't listening and probably thought something horrible had happened to Aiba while he was gone because he had no clue where he'd went ( ... )