Snippet-y thing and some MORE pimping

Aug 12, 2010 02:58

Pimps first: je_fqfest. Still posting. Arashi stories are here. I'm behind on commenting but so far it's all pretty good! One of them was/is/will be mine--I'm not that happy with it, honestly. I really think I could have done better. Or more. We'll see what the response is, though.

je_ficgames is DONE posting and now it's just a matter of time until voting ( Read more... )

au, sex-demon au, i fic-ninja'd...myself?, needs a pimp tag, arashi

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aegistheia August 12 2010, 08:47:12 UTC
Why am I even up?!

But honestly, why are you so amazing? I don't ever think I've ever seen a pimp post packaged together so neatly with a 'fic snippet' before. I THINK I LIKE THIS PATTERN. 8D

Your SHO. Oh my god, I love with your Sho in this universe. His beatdowns aren't flashy nor epic, but they're the kind that touches the soul. It's only love, indeed. That's all Sho ever was, even before he chose to fall.

Nino was dying and Sho-chan gave up Heaven for him.

;_______; It could almost be tragic, but it's just their reality, no more and no less. I don't think I can love the direction you took this in any more than I do. And having Aiba understand that in a way that went beyond words - ♥____♥

Also: "Nice blessing!" Aiba called out from the kitchen. "Double punch! You turned the water! I'm going to have to re-wash the dishes…"

I DON'T KNOW WHY BUT I LAUGHED SO HARD. And protecting Nino's sex life with demons with blessings!

There's lube and condoms all over it.The first thought that came to my mind was, "Used or unused?" ( ... )

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still_ciircee August 14 2010, 04:30:42 UTC
You were awake because you knew I was going to flip out and spam the internet! Or something!

There are not words for how happy this comment made me. I kind of want to roll around in it like catnip. I'm glad you liked the saving-Nino-with-blessings bit because I really liked that part myself.

a pet that Satoshi fucksJun squinted against the sunlight, watching Nino moving around his apartment. Nino was spell-crafting--not like a witch would, just material spells--and not paying him any attention ( ... )

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aegistheia August 14 2010, 08:09:15 UTC
Well, I'm awake again when I should be asleep, and you're not helping me fix that. There are not enough words for how happy THIS made me! *____*

See, your universe is so charming. Even with all the mythological elements there is still believabililty in each and every aspect that you'd written, because of your attention to detail, delicate touch with powerful subjects, comedic timing, and a host of many other things.

I'm not going to lie, I came in for the lolz and walked out with Sho and Nino's relationship close to my heart. The theme of love that you're working on in here is really wonderful, and fun too, with all the sex and legends (and sexual legends) going on. Yes, I am horrible at puns. (Also, before I forget: Sho drinking milk. Some smoke, and he drinks MILK. I LOVE HIM SO MUCH ( ... )

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honeypuffed August 12 2010, 09:17:13 UTC
god so like, i never saw the other ones you wrote until now and so i just had to sit here and read my way through them and my brain is kind of dead and there are so many comments i should be able to make but no really i can't even remember.

i love this universe so much ;_;

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still_ciircee August 14 2010, 04:33:20 UTC
! I am SO happy that you read them and liked them. I keep thinking that I could have done them better, with less angst and more belivability (lol, sex demons and fallen angels and I want it to be more realistic). So you saying that you love it makes me all squishy inside.

Also: Your icon. IS SO CUTE. LOVE.

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honeypuffed August 14 2010, 05:04:36 UTC
well just the fact that i loved it so much means you obviously did it ~perfectly~. lmao this is not me saying my opinion counts for everything, but just that i'm actually normally kind of irritated by this kind of au, and the fact that i didn't even blink an eye at it and instead actually really really really really loved it-- I HONESTLY CANNOT DESCRIBE HOW MUCH. i can't remember the last thing i read that i really just desperately didn't want to finish reading. lately i kind of go about reading like, it's great for filling time but i'm not really into it, but this, really, hhhhnnngg. this is not very coherent and i honestly wish i could just touch your chest give you my brain for a second so you could understand but alas.

man i know :< i just want to snuggle it forever.

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still_ciircee August 14 2010, 05:20:49 UTC
I would totally let you touch my chest touch Sho's chest lend me your brain!

Also: a;ldfj;lsdjfsd YOU ARE TOO SWEET. I LOVE YOU. I want to snuggle you forever.

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littlealex August 12 2010, 09:43:36 UTC
i love that everyone makes sleepy posts when i'm just finishing my work day. this was a good one too! i loved the description of sho showing jun what feelings were. ♥ i want to read more~~ :D

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still_ciircee August 14 2010, 04:35:07 UTC
XD You liked it! Yay! And I'm kind of stupidly happy that my middle-of-the-night-what-am-I-doing posts hit at the end of your workday. But mostly I'm happy that you liked the way Sho gave Jun a taste of what he felt. I love it when Sho loves Nino.

(And there is more just a bit up-thread now. But it's more about Jun and Nino.)

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littlealex August 14 2010, 04:59:44 UTC
that was a little bit adorable too. ♥ lololol a trampoline

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still_ciircee August 14 2010, 05:21:39 UTC
XD I'm glad you liked it!

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beltenebra August 12 2010, 12:47:06 UTC
Oh my god, I loved every word of this. You create these wonderful, rich universes revealed just a bit at a time and perfectly maintain all of the bonds that make the boys who they are. How are you so awesome?

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still_ciircee August 14 2010, 04:37:04 UTC
I'm blushing. No, literally. Thank you so much for saying that about my AUs. It makes me SO happy.

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tangiblewhimsy August 12 2010, 16:07:00 UTC
DYING.

I think I've mentioned before (or maybe I haven't, in which case shame on me), but this is one of my favorite of your AUs. The reason for that is because you take what usually turns into a really trite idea, ridden with sloppy angst and poor characterizations and then you turned it into something poignant and amazing. This is your Super Power over fic and why I love you so so so so so much.

That scene where Sho gives Jun a taste of what it is he feels---that was intense. Whoa.

Oh and yeah. All of the Ohmiya sex in the background being treated as nothing more than a too-loud TV? I lol'd. So hard.

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still_ciircee August 14 2010, 04:39:36 UTC
a;ldkfj;lsjkf YOU. You make me so happy. I'm kind of afraid that these DO come off as angsty and trite and kind of generally stupid and you make me feel so much better about them. Because you write so beautifully that any praise you throw my way is just. a;ldjkfs;ldj THANK YOU.

(I really loved writing the Ohmiya-sex as background noise. Like 'oh, crap, he's eating him again--it's YOUR turn to make him stop'. It was funny for me. I'm glad you liked it too.)

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tangiblewhimsy August 14 2010, 04:56:13 UTC
I think that we as writers villainize angst. It becomes the bad guy because it is so often abused and overused. But in the tiniest of amounts that little ache and sense of 'Oh, my heart!' is an extremely powerful tool. I think that you take the oft overplayed idea of angels/demons/supernatural beings and manage to make it accessible without taking it too seriously. A perfect balance of crack and drama. TO WHICH I AM DELICIOUSLY ADDICTED!

(It was hilarious to me, especially because I come from a household where certain people really are ridiculously loud. You get accustomed to it, but having guests over can be a little awkward. LMAO)

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