The Young Bachelor 1/2

Apr 08, 2012 23:53

Title: The Young Bachelor, Part 1/2
Pairing: Harry/Louis, Niall/Liam
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Louis is persuaded ito sign up for a local dating show called The Young Bachelor.
Disclaimer: If they were mine, they'd be fucking on every interview.
A/N: My first ever. Comments are lovely. Also credit to colazitron because she writes the most perfect things and one of ( Read more... )

one direction, harry/louis, fic, liam/niall

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hozrien April 8 2012, 19:46:35 UTC
holy fuck I want more this is really gooooood.
/flails in a corner.

Also lol @ niall and liam.

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still_water30 April 9 2012, 01:40:15 UTC
Thank you babes!

/flails because this is the first fic comment i've ever gotten

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hozrien April 9 2012, 01:42:25 UTC
oh really? YOU'RE WELCOME BB
I want moreee I'll comment the shit out of it even though I'm not the flailly things but I'm hyper and this was a good fanfic and I want part 2 now.

<3

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xctlywerulykme April 8 2012, 21:20:40 UTC
dear lord, this is brilliant. your characterisation, the plot, it's just gold! and it's so HOT. aaaaaah, i can't wait for part 2!

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still_water30 April 9 2012, 01:42:17 UTC
Aww THANK YOU! Excuse me while I blush in corner.

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loribeast April 9 2012, 16:40:26 UTC
This is hilarious, and I really like the writing style. Liam and Niall make me giggle and poor Louis- great characterizations anyway.

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still_water30 April 10 2012, 00:52:15 UTC
not gonna lie, I flaied a little. I love YOUR work, just haven't been able to properly go online long enough to leave well-deserved reviews. /le sob because school should go ram itself with a spiked bricks

And, thank you. :)

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loribeast April 10 2012, 14:39:15 UTC
gosh thank you, it always surprises me when people like my writing haha!

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zniam April 9 2012, 21:45:26 UTC
!!! This is hilarious and adorable and all good things. I loooove the Liam/Niall dynamic here and faint shades of Nouis? Maybe I'm imagining things and I'm super excited for part 2.
Bless you for sharing this ♥

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still_water30 April 10 2012, 00:48:42 UTC
Faint shades of Nouis? Ahaaaa. Squinting excellently, are we? ;)
And thanks, bebz. Bless you for reading.

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colazitron April 11 2012, 16:49:42 UTC
I have absolutely no idea what I did to inspire this, but I'd really love for you to tell me so I can do it again as often as possible, because this is amazing. I absolutely adore Louis' early morning thought processes of wanting to kill Niall but not really and how he basically doesn't really give a shit about impressing the 'mystery young bachelor' and obviously ends up doing just that because he's amazing. Also Harry in all his glory. God yes please. So very much looking forward to part 2.

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