The Young Bachelor, Part 2/2

Apr 27, 2012 11:16


Title: The Young Bachelor, Part 2/2
Pairing: Harry/Louis, Niall/Liam, Zayn/Niall/Liam
Rating: R
Summary: Louis is persuaded into signing up for a local dating show called The Young Bachelor, because Niall is awesome like that. And I suck at summaries.
Disclaimer: If they were mine, they'd be fucking on every interview.
A/N: I still dedicate this to colazitron and ( Read more... )

one direction, harry/louis, niall/liam, fiction, zayn/niall/liam

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Comments 17

snuffleslove April 27 2012, 08:02:06 UTC
omg.
omg.
freaking out.

FREAKING OUT.

you basically tackled all my shipper feels with this one story. and also.
the line at the end

little TV show?! X FACTOR <3

AHHHHHHHH

brilliant, just fucking brilliant.

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still_water30 April 28 2012, 04:13:24 UTC
Oooh I'm glad to hear that!!!

And brownie points for getting the xfactor association -bum five-

Thanks *blushes*

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loribeast April 27 2012, 09:04:01 UTC
nhguefwyt this was so good, I loved it. and omg, plot twist: mY OT3 WAS THERE I love you so much for that you don't understand. anyway yes, this is really well written, with enough humour and hotness, good job.

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still_water30 April 28 2012, 04:17:11 UTC
So many nice words in just one paragraph, lemme keez u.

Yes, basically the image of zayn/liam/niall in all their domestic bliss gives me enough joy to last a summer. Thank you for reading!

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grandnature04 April 27 2012, 14:05:39 UTC
Oh that was just amazing!

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still_water30 April 28 2012, 04:18:53 UTC
Tanksssss! <3

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colazitron April 27 2012, 15:12:47 UTC
Oh my god. All of the unexpected feels there towards the end. Wow. I absolutley love it. This instant connection between Louis and Harry is so wonderful and yet it doesn't cheapen their friendship with the other lads in any way.

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still_water30 April 28 2012, 04:29:20 UTC
Christ on crutches. Hello.

Um yesyes I wanted to make the relationship between Louis and Harry special in a way, without casting a shadow on the general crazy character of the friendship among the group.

It's an honor to get this review, brb imma go shit rainbow in a corner

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andine_mcfly April 27 2012, 17:09:37 UTC
I'M IN LOVE WITH YOU.

This is one of the best written fanfictions I've read in ages. It's funny - to be honest, absolutely hilarious - and you are just so good and now I have all these feelings and I'll be reading this like every week because this is just FANTASTIC.

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still_water30 April 28 2012, 04:32:19 UTC
This makes go aaaahhh

Thank you, thank you so much. I don't know who paid you but thanks for saying all these kind words *sniffles*

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