Clawing Dark

May 14, 2006 19:10

This was originally used as the rebirth of a vampire. I'm thinking it works better as a stand alone zombie bit from the dead's point of view.

Memphis )

horror, zombies, meridian

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Rebirth trascendenza July 17 2006, 00:46:59 UTC
Horror, like a warm bath, accepting horror, even more terrifying than fighting against it.

What an awesome line! I have to say, right now I'm on a big vampire kick and so I see this more as a vampire POV than a zombie one, but I can see your point. This writing is so atmospheric, I love the movement of it, the progression of the narrative, the imagery. Lovely work. I'm so glad you left me a comment so I could find this :)

Friending this journal, hope you don't mind :)

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stilljustharry July 17 2006, 01:59:51 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad the pacing/movement wasn't lost. I really like writing without sentence structure, though most of the time that only works for steam of consciousness things, much to my chagrin.

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