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Fic: words unspoken

Jan 01, 2010 12:23

Title: words unspoken
Author: Mary (stillxmyxheart)
Rating: G
Genre: Angsty Fluff
Word Count: 800
Characters: Rose/Ten
Disclaimer: Anything you recognize? Ain't mine.
Summary: Rose has a habit of wandering off, but this time he's angry with her and she doesn't know why.

A/N: For Challenge 20 at then_theres_us. My first fic of 2010! Happy New Year, everybody <3

( His slim figure is a few paces ahead of her, his head down and his hands in his pockets, his overcoat billowing out behind him. He radiates his own electricity and she can tell he's angry with her. )

fic: doctor who, fic: pairing: rose tyler/ten, fic: all fic, fic: challenge fic

Comments 16

beauty_within16 January 3 2010, 20:44:45 UTC

Aww, I love it.

stillxmyxheart January 3 2010, 20:57:20 UTC

Thank you, bb <3

teruel_a_witch January 4 2010, 20:47:48 UTC

Oh,oh, this is so close to home, and it's not even that he can't say it, he just won't (*shakes fist at RTD*)

Hee, I love it when he gets mad at her for risking her life, he didn't do that enough in season 2, I wanted to blazing tension which you conveyed perfectly, love the intensity ♥ and of course, the kissing, yay :D

stillxmyxheart January 4 2010, 21:26:13 UTC

Hee, thank you, bb <3

knm1234 January 19 2010, 18:26:05 UTC

I'm reading through your stuff now (my, you're prolific!), so you may be getting a few late reviews, but I just wanted to highlight this line:

"His gaze is dark as he looks at her, his eyes roving over her face, pointing out with silent efficiency"

Loved that, silent efficiency - a lovely phrase.

Good, sweet story too x

stillxmyxheart January 19 2010, 19:24:49 UTC

my, you're prolific!
Indeed I am XD But I love all reviews so don't hesitate to keep leaving them XD

I quite liked that line as well *nod*

Thank you so much! <3