Comments | stillxmyxheart: Fic: new you, new me

stillxmyxheart

Fic: new you, new me

Jan 27, 2010 14:23

Title: new you, new me
Author: Mary (stillxmyxheart)
Beta: nylana
Rating: G
Genre: Fluff
Word Count: 1,048
Characters: Rose/Ten
Disclaimer: Anything you recognize? Ain't mine.
Summary: She's afraid that he doesn't want her anymore.

A/N: For Challenge 23 at then_theres_us :D

( She looks back up at him and recognizes something in his eyes, something inside of her own heart: the wish for forever, the dream of the two of them together in the TARDIS, visiting new planets and meeting new civilizations and all of it with her hand firmly enclosed in his. )

fic: doctor who, fic: pairing: rose tyler/ten, fic: all fic, fic: challenge fic

Comments 27

happyfew January 27 2010, 20:03:25 UTC

&hearts He smells different now, she realizes, somehow cool and vaguely spicy where before he had been warm and earthy, and underneath all of that the everlasting aroma of time and space, of stars spread at his feet and suspended above his head, waiting for him to pluck them out of the sky. &hearts

WOWOWOW. Like, never stop writing, bb. Okay.

*tries to be coherent* This was completely gorgeous. Just so them and I love how the tone changes when they get back to the flat.

And the last line. Oh. &hearts

stillxmyxheart January 27 2010, 20:26:28 UTC

*cuddles you* Thank you so much, bb, always <3

weasleytook January 27 2010, 20:20:58 UTC

I'm not reading your fic, because you know, never seen Who.

But I am watching your mood theme repeatedly. ADORABLE AND BOUNCY.

stillxmyxheart January 27 2010, 20:28:05 UTC

*dies* I was wondering why you were commenting on this post XD Made me stop walking while checking my email going, "Why the crap is Hoppy reviewing one of my fics?" XD

beauty_within16 January 27 2010, 22:30:46 UTC

I love this.

"I'll always want you with me," he replies, staring intently at her. She looks back up at him and recognizes something in his eyes, something inside of her own heart: the wish for forever, the dream of the two of them together in the TARDIS, visiting new planets and meeting new civilizations and all of it with her hand firmly enclosed in his. She feels herself growing absurdly emotional and she looks away for a moment, taking a breath.

I think this is my favourite part. The whole thing is gorgeous. <3

stillxmyxheart January 28 2010, 01:41:33 UTC

Thank you so much, darling <3

johnmayergirl23 January 27 2010, 22:40:02 UTC

She looks back up at him and recognizes something in his eyes, something inside of her own heart: the wish for forever, the dream of the two of them together in the TARDIS, visiting new planets and meeting new civilizations and all of it with her hand firmly enclosed in his.

:D :D :D :D :D

"Further than we've ever gone before," he replies and she smiles, feeling as though she may burst from sheer joy as he flips the lever and they hurtle off into the Vortex, closer now to forever than they ever have been.

:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

I want to rewatch s2 again!! Awwww, bbTen and cute Rose, bein' all adorable and stuff. Lovely!

Is this the fic that's been giving you such issues? Because if so, it turned out really well!

stillxmyxheart January 28 2010, 01:42:07 UTC

Hah, it was. I'm really pleased with how it finally turned out, even if it took forever XD

Thank you so much, bb <3

juliet316 January 28 2010, 02:53:43 UTC

Awww... So sweet and fluffy and very S2 Rose and Ten. *sniffles for what might have been*

stillxmyxheart January 28 2010, 02:56:06 UTC

*huggles* Thank you so much :D