Comments | stillxmyxheart: Fic: we end before we begin

stillxmyxheart

Mar 16, 2010 13:17

Title: we end before we begin
Author: Mary (stillxmyxheart)
Rating: G
Genre: Angst
Word Count: 400
Characters: Rose/Ten II
Disclaimer: Anything you recognize? Ain't mine.
Summary: Sometimes love just isn't enough.

A/N: For Challenge 27 at then_theres_us :D

( The breeze off the ocean is warm, ruffling the skirt of her white dress and tossing her hair around her head. The sand is soft under her feet as she stands motionless, staring at the water. )

Comments 34

knm1234 March 16 2010, 18:54:16 UTC

Nooooooooo! That was so very very sad, mostly because it was so beautifully written. Nice job x

stillxmyxheart March 16 2010, 18:54:43 UTC

Thank you so much <3

salimali March 16 2010, 19:54:05 UTC

*sob* *sniff*

Please make it better *begs* :( :(

stillxmyxheart March 16 2010, 19:57:07 UTC

:( *hugs*

quean_of_swords March 16 2010, 20:41:45 UTC

Aw, heartbreaking!

stillxmyxheart March 16 2010, 21:17:22 UTC

ascendant_angel March 16 2010, 20:58:33 UTC

That's beautiful but also heartbreaking. It needs a sequel or prequel though with the Doctors side and why he didn't go though with it.

stillxmyxheart March 16 2010, 21:17:43 UTC

Thinking on a sequel ;)

Thank you <3

helygen March 16 2010, 21:00:15 UTC

Oh this is lovely, but it's broken my heart :'(

stillxmyxheart March 16 2010, 21:17:55 UTC

*glues it back together* Thank you so much <3