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Feb 07, 2007 14:46

this is something i wrote. interpret as you will ( Read more... )

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joyful_sound February 8 2007, 03:03:43 UTC

Of all the poems you've put on your LJ, this one is the one that's got the most poignant meaning weaved into it. Hence, it's my favorite so far... Thanks for sharing it with us, James.

acewashy February 8 2007, 03:33:48 UTC

It always makes writing better when the writer has an intimate understanding of what he writes about.

So this got the idea across well...

Is it free verse?

qtip23 February 8 2007, 03:53:06 UTC

very good James...excellent use of the free verse style..

dancing_queen85 February 9 2007, 03:36:57 UTC

ya, James, thats gotta be one of your best. :)

stinkoman20_6 February 12 2007, 16:34:45 UTC

thanks everyone for the kind words. to Joy i apperciate it. To Andrew yes it's free verse. to lance thank you. to ana :). and in cas eyou didn't understand the song's chorus, oh yes it is a song, it depicts how change will come whether we like it or not and it can be good (the sun will shine in winter) and it can be worse but it's still okay.