When "brown" just isn't good enough.
So I'm reading and loving a certain fanfic.
BUT.
The author keeps referring to Iruka's hair and eyes as "chocolate". Seven times in the first chapter. I mention something about it in my review.
New chapter. Twelve "chocolate ____ (s)". It obviously doesn't matter to anyone but me, so I will say this here:
CHOCOLATE IS A FOOOOD. NOT A COLOR. THERE ARE PLENTY OF OTHER FANCY WAYS TO SAY BROWN. MIX IT UP.
Thanks. I had to let that out.
BUT.
The author keeps referring to Iruka's hair and eyes as "chocolate". Seven times in the first chapter. I mention something about it in my review.
New chapter. Twelve "chocolate ____ (s)". It obviously doesn't matter to anyone but me, so I will say this here:
CHOCOLATE IS A FOOOOD. NOT A COLOR. THERE ARE PLENTY OF OTHER FANCY WAYS TO SAY BROWN. MIX IT UP.
Thanks. I had to let that out.