Please read and comment on this story of mine..

[stitch3787]

Ok.. So here's my first Final Draft of my story for my class.. I still need a title so if anyone has any suggestions for a title that would be great.. And if there is anything in here that you i should change please let me know! I have another week to work on it before it is due.. but i would like to be done with it soon... So please Read and

Comments

[_maven_]

it's good. but it all just sounds soooo high skoolish. yaknow? but it's good

[anonymous]

I just wanted to make a quick comment to say I’m glad I found your blog. Thanks