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stl29tide

The Big Gamble (Part 1)

Oct 30, 2011 23:58

Part One:He remembers the moment exactly; the moment his life changed forever. He remembers how the lights were dimmed, the soft glow overhead bright enough to light the table. He can see the faces of the other men clearly, sweating and looking nervously between the two of them. He still remembers the cocky, arrogant look on the fool sitting ( Read more... )

fic: the big gamble

Comments 5

marsabi November 1 2011, 12:36:57 UTC

Fun start! I like all the fun conversation, and you do a great job balncing the characters here. Kudos!

smoothlikebutta November 2 2011, 01:41:27 UTC

What an interesting cast of characters around that card table. I love how Casey came to Luke's defense.

nancygrew November 2 2011, 02:15:37 UTC

Such a great chapter!

I love how you got Reid to Oakdale by having had Bob be his mentor all along.

Love the characters you got together for the poker game. It was so easy to picture them saying the dialogue you gave them.

The plot is such a fun idea. It's a way to show Noah at his most Noahtastic and to throw Reid and Luke together.

Love how upset everyone [except an amused Paul] was at Noah. Love Casey talking up his best friend.

Very fun.

drunkyluke December 28 2011, 19:34:25 UTC

ok. noah did NOT just do that! he just didn't do that!!! has he no shame? he has dumb some pretty stupid things in his time, but this, THIS takes the cake! my god, noah! what the hell is wrong with you?

reid and katie! YAAY!!!! love how she lifted his cell number! i like her A LOT! this is gonna be so much fun!!! luke is gonna be PISSED!!!!!!!

and, here we go!!!

bubbafrogz September 11 2016, 23:22:09 UTC

Loved the birdcage!! WOW, Noah is a prick. Casey is a good friend. And Brad did protest a bit.