The Big Gamble (Part Six)

Oct 31, 2011 00:39

Part Six:“Nurse Taylor ( Read more... )

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smoothlikebutta November 2 2011, 02:02:37 UTC
I just didn’t…when you love someone you’re supposed to fight for them and…..what Noah did tonight was not okay. That’s not how I wanted him to fight for me. I just wanted him to finally think ‘Hey. I love Luke. He matters to me and we’ll be fine as long as we’re always there for each other and work together’ but…..that’s just….not him.”

Yay for Luke coming to this realization and wanting a real date with Reid.

Babbling!Luke is cute.

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nancygrew November 2 2011, 02:45:38 UTC
“Your people skills are considerably lacking. I hope you’re aware of that fact.”

“I am,” he said unaffected. Very humorous and Reid-like!! It was also very in character that after a moment's hesitation he was very nonchalant about how his relationship w Luke would be viewed by others. He's Reid Oliver, dammit and doesn't care what other people think.

I like that you have Luke actually take care of Reid after the punch instead of running off after Noah.

I like Luke being all brave and putting his [not very] smooth moves on Reid.

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drunkyluke December 28 2011, 21:09:54 UTC
i really, really liked this chapter! luke is finally opening his eyes. he's starting to see noah in a whole new light. one that really isn't all that flattering. i'm surprised it took katie 2 days to give reid the third degree about the fundraiser. so not like her. hoping that reid gets to meet lucinda! that'll be worth the price of admission!

yeah luke, you did pretty much through yourself at him. cut yourself some slack. you don't have lot of experience with this sort of thing. you're babbling because you might just be starting to realize that there is more to this reid thing than meets the eye. loved the fact that you wanted to take care of him after noah.

yeah noah, you're a big man aren't you? you seem to forget that you made this happen, don't you?

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bubbafrogz September 12 2016, 01:45:48 UTC
AHHH walked right into that! Accident or on purpose??? Reid is good! Luke doesn't stand a chance with that pull! Whoa that was quite the confrontation. So glad Luke is taking care of Reid and not running after Noah. Bonding! Reid is so amazing! And so is Luke! YEA to honesty and hoping it sticks.

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