The Big Gamble (Part Eleven)

[stl29tide]

Part Eleven:“Well men, you know the drill. Five dollar minimum, there is no maximum. Let’s hope this one doesn’t turn out as bad as the last one did.” A couple awkward chuckles were heard and Casey just snorted. Reid however, made no acknowledgment as to what happened at the last poker game. Instead he just casually took long drags of his beer;

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[smoothlikebutta]

“And just what do I have to offer you?”

Luke took a deep breath. “Your heart.”

“Oh of all the gross, sentimental things I’ve ever hea……..”

“If I win then I get your heart. If you win, you get to keep it.”

Awww! Cheesy, sweet, adorable, and so Luke. I like the idea of Reid losing the hand and his heart, but ultimately being the winner (along with Luke).

[nancygrew]

I love confident, take-charge Luciano! He's been with Reid for less than a month and he's already been freed from the shackles of his insecurities!

It's so fun to see the poker players interact and I love your depiction of them. It's so easy to visualize. Poor Casey never gets to stay in for very long.

[bubbafrogz]

Good luck Luke! WOW! Go Luke! Yes!