The Big Gamble (Epilogue)

Oct 31, 2011 01:12

Epilogue:“Holy shit, how much stuff do you have?” Reid asked as he carried in the last box. He looked around his living room to see boxes of all sizes practically littering his living room floor. Not knowing where to set it, he just plopped it down on top of another ( Read more... )

fic: the big gamble

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donia23 November 2 2011, 11:33:48 UTC
what an amazing fic ,loved it so much
thank u for sharing it w/ us

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snapegirlusa November 3 2011, 02:21:06 UTC
I LOVED this story sooo much. I wanted to comment all along the way, but I never wanted to stop reading! Luke was so beautifully in charge at the end. I loved how he took over that poker game with his 'take no prisoners' attitude. Well, maybe one prisoner that he's like to tie up! ;)

I love how you brought all the Oakdale characters into it. Aunt "Meg Ryan" made me laugh. LOL Especially because I used to watch the show when Meg Ryan actually starred on it! ;)

Noah is such a douche for what he did, and as always, he never learned his lesson. I loved what Reid said to him at Al's about having dinner with 'my boyfriend'. And my heart sank when Reid witnessed the kiss at the Fair. Awww. You did a great job on this. I would recommend this to everyone!

The 'suits' as borders were great as well! Incredible graphics.

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Wonderful! missbecks1022 November 3 2011, 21:52:16 UTC
I loved this story so much! It was classic douche Noah at his best (or worst!), and I loved that Lily wasn't "all Noah, all the time" in this story. Lucinda & Reid snarking at each other was so funny, and Paul was with Meg....yea!!

You totally captured Reid and Luke perfectly here, and Katie was hilarious declaring herself Reid's "friend" in the beginning. (Great to have Brad alive too!) I laughed so hard at them getting to know each other, and Reid's stubbornness and Luke's lack of self-esteem were spot on. What a great idea for a story. You did such a fantastic job!

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carol38 November 4 2011, 20:06:11 UTC
Adorable story. I enjoyed it very much.

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kccalgal November 5 2011, 04:57:25 UTC
Wonderful piece you've created. Very entertaining. Reid is his very snarky self and Luke grew more confident with each chapter. Your cameo's of Paul, Henry, Casey, and Dusty were too funny. I'll be reiding that chapter over again a couple times.

I've missed your other stories. I hope you are feeling up to continuing them soon.

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