Comments | stolenghost: current life half written.

stolenghost

current life half written.

Apr 28, 2010 00:43

pop culture killed my creativity. debt overwhelms my hopes and dreams. i want a new career a new beginning to help me in the inner struggle. i still feel evil in my soul something that twitches and causes me fear in the dark. she is my hope my life my best friend until the end. my idea of love has been tested after feeling its truth twice before ( Read more... )

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alesserennui April 28 2010, 16:36:16 UTC

wow shaun, this is real. emphasis on the word real.
its great in that its from a different place in life. sure you might have thought about the subjects you address in the past, but it feels like in this writting you are standing on the edge of a diving board, waiting to jump whenever your ready.

i really liked the part about the stars being too big. their not, but at least your honest about how you feel. its one of those lines that really shows an outsider who might read all your work throughout your time just the place you are standing today.

it's straight my friend.

superyessica April 29 2010, 05:24:06 UTC

i love your prose

life anonymous June 20 2010, 21:54:37 UTC

I feel like i have been stuck in this world for so long, so i have to get to the bottom of this. I wish i can fly over the world like a bird.To me i feel lost in SUCH A BIG WORLD.If i can be some kind of (Goddes like god) then i can change the world!.and be a love kind of world not a HATE WORLD a LOVE WORLD so if you ever think that the word BIG IS REALLY BIG WILL YOUR WRONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.the world is big for everthing.so for now by by!!:)

Re: life stolenghost June 20 2010, 22:45:40 UTC