Great chapter! A lot going on... I loved that Olympias and Hephaestion get along... I'm glad she sees Hephaestion as one to love Alexander with her, not to steal him away... and I'm sooo glad Hephaestion beat Bolon! I hated that guy! It's very interesting to see Alexander all carried away by his passion and love for Hephaestion, and it puts him in a tight spot, I guess, to have to be a serious king, but to feel like a teenager in love inside... those two better get settled down before their passion ends up in more conflict! Loved this! Great characterisation, I am sooo in love with your Hephaestion! :) Hugs, Arlad
Thanks Arlad. It 'was' a busy chapter. Yes, these two will have to get it together. And they will, because I think it's time to end this story. LOL
I'm glad you like Hephaestion. I have a few little snippets written for future stories. Our Hephaestion is with other men in those stories. Maybe they might get written some day.
Great update. I love Heph and Olympias relationship and the wonderful and carefree effect he has on her. I also like how she views his relationship with her son...not out of envy but with love and acceptance. Heph is going to be a loving "son" to her and a valubale asset to Alexander's empire
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It was kind of fun to give Olympias a kind heart and a day of fun with Hephaestion. She needs more of that. So does Alexander. Maybe Hephaestion can get Alexander to lighten up in the next chapter. Hopefully, I can build their bond before I conclude this story.
wow.. such an exciting update and very long***grin*** it is really worth waiting for.. I am surprise with Heph's reaction to Bolon... he is really going to kill him, did he?? HUMmmm such a furious boy.. and the spanking part!! I certain that petar will love this. Thank you very much for an update and now I want to know what Alexander will punish Bolon and what will happen when he get back to Heph's room. BTW, did Heph have any meal yet?? I think he miss his lunch again..
Oh.. and also, I love Heph and Olympias too. I love how you portray Olympias in this story... her life is sad enough and it should be brighten when Heph has enter their life. I wish Alexander will listen to Olymipias and try to understand her.
Not to much more will be written about Bolon. Maybe a mention of what happens to him. I don't think Hephaestion would have actually killed Bolon, although I think he has it in him to kill a man. Not for such an offense though. It's up to you.
I think I would have to write ten more spanking stories to get better at it!
Hephaestion and Alexander are now eating together and making love (carefully) before they fall asleep. So yes, Hephaestion tummy is full. Poor boy. He-he.
Normally reading about spanking is a kink I enjoy reading (and I did, oh I'm so ashamed)but grrr at Alexander. If the spanking was suppose to train Hephastian to like being spanked thats one thing but to punish and love at the same time... Am thinking that Alexander can't do much right in my biased opinion. Give me their address, I feel an intervention coming on. *no he's mine, mine*
We have waited long for this update, but it was so worth it:D!! I kind of liked the way you pictured Olympias, way much nicer then most people. And it's nice that she and Heph get along so well. I understand that Alexander was angry, and I didn't mind caus the spankng was hot!! update soon, Hugs Susan.
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Arlad
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I'm glad you like Hephaestion. I have a few little snippets written for future stories. Our Hephaestion is with other men in those stories. Maybe they might get written some day.
Conclusion in the next few days.
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Thanks Denise!
Love,
Wendy
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I think I would have to write ten more spanking stories to get better at it!
Hephaestion and Alexander are now eating together and making love (carefully) before they fall asleep. So yes, Hephaestion tummy is full. Poor boy. He-he.
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Wendy
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*no he's mine, mine*
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I think you just want to steal sweet Hephaestion away from poor Alexander. You want to take him home and cuddle him.
Thanks for reading Charis,
Wendy
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I kind of liked the way you pictured Olympias, way much nicer then most people. And it's nice that she and Heph get along so well.
I understand that Alexander was angry, and I didn't mind caus the spankng was hot!!
update soon,
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Susan.
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The conclusion will be up Wednesday. I hope.
Thanks so much for commenting.
Love,
Wendy
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