Private Practice fanfic.

Oct 17, 2008 15:57

Title: Falling Up
Fandom/characters: Private Practice, Violet/Cooper with a healthy helping of Pete
Rating: PG13
Word count: 3120
Spoilers: All episodes. Post-2x2.
Notes: Three and a half hours ago, I spontaneously started writing this fic and I didn't stop. I love it when that happens. I also had a ball writing Pete.

Whatever he expected to see, it was not a frazzled-looking Violet Turner with one hand raised mid-pound and the other swiping ferociously at watery eyes. )

fanfic: i wrote some, fandom: private practice

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rheakurokawa October 17 2008, 21:12:42 UTC
this is fantastically well written. very in character, very very good portrayal. i love it :)

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stop_theworld October 19 2008, 19:55:00 UTC
Thank you so much!

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liquid_courage October 17 2008, 21:53:22 UTC
This was great! I totally love that Violet went to Pete, and that he told Cooper. You did a wonderful job. ♥

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stop_theworld October 19 2008, 19:55:18 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

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severuslovesme October 17 2008, 22:04:13 UTC
HI. I LOVE YOU. AND THIS. A LOT.

It is just so, so perfect. Cooper's argument about why he was in love with Violet but thought he was in love with Charlotte was totally spot-on, and very much where I hope the show takes this!

And Pete was perfect, and I loved Violet kissing him but him stopping her. Poor Violet, I'm so glad she talked to Pete! Her repeating how stupid she was was excellent.

Basically, this was amazing and gorgeous and wonderful! And I want to see it happen on the show!

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stop_theworld October 19 2008, 19:58:40 UTC
LOL I ALMOST TEXTED YOU DURING THE WRITING PROCESS. Just out of excitement. But then I decided against it. :D

But anyway, thank you so much for your lovely comment. ♥! I'm really glad Cooper's explanation made sense to you, because that was easily the most challenging part to write. I reeeeally wanted a happy ending but that meant somehow justifying Cooper's breaking up with Charlotte sometime after we saw them together but before the next morning, which made my brain do a wrinkly-face.

Aaaaaalso I know we still need to have commentary-watching, part three! This week is difficult, but I'll keep writing notes to myself and you should keep nagging me, and then it will happen. Pinky swear.

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severuslovesme October 20 2008, 02:30:30 UTC
You totally should have! :D

You did a fantastic job explaining Cooper's motivation - it was completely believable!

Definitely need a commentary session soon! Let me know when you're free and I'll keep poking you :D

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michellek October 18 2008, 00:35:20 UTC
Oh, yay, I love this. I like that she went to Pete -- I really only enjoy him during his scenes with Violet, tbh -- and the ending was lovely.

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stop_theworld October 19 2008, 19:59:40 UTC
Thanks so much! I feel the same way about Pete, actually. Or I guess I could say I like him except when his scenes are either with or all about Addison.

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gimlicakeshop October 18 2008, 01:16:05 UTC
This was excellent. I'd love things to go this way on the show, but if it doesn't happen we'll always have your story. Thanks!

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stop_theworld October 19 2008, 19:59:59 UTC
Aww, thanks!

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