"The sentence in the last-pass galleys read: 'It was as close a declaration of love as J.J. was capable of making.' I would have added a preposition: 'It was as close to a declaration of love as J.J. was capable of making.' I sat by the window and watched the ice floes on the Hudson and thought about the sentence. It was as close a declaration of
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