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[stoptouchingme]

I wrote a very short story at work on wednesday.  here it is.

A midday city sky. Walking alonge, the clouds began to fall liquescently. They seemed very sad about it, so I joined them. i began to fall liquescanetly too. The clouds and myself, turning ourselves to water drops.
A girl walked to me, safely shielded from the falling

Comments

[wheniwasalive]

There was anarchy in her eyes, and you were too passive, letting the clouds lead you away. You saw only your imagination and she looked at you through reality.

[stoptouchingme]

is that a song lyric, or your opinion? its strange how you place the blame on the main character. what if i had switch i and she with i and he?

[wheniwasalive]

It's my opinion and I would have said the same thing for that's what your story made me think of. Isn't it a good thing when your stories make people think about character analyzation? or whatever, atleast think something at all.

[stoptouchingme]

no no definitely. thank you very much for your input and opinion, i was just wondering if it was a gender issue. thank you for thinking

[aaaaction]

I don't get it.

[stoptouchingme]

thats ok. i left that part out. its ok that you dont get it.

[dbittey]

really dig the piece
wish i could be in that class
i will be in a bit over a year
or so i hope

[stoptouchingme]

your time will come man. keep your head down but keep it full.

[dbittey]

"keep your head down but keep it full"

i'm gonna get that tattooed on my ribcage in hong kong

[stoptouchingme]

haha. its so cool that youre turning into a tattoo guy.

Re: Double speak zachary, I wrote this for you last night!

[stoptouchingme]

i dont think i like violent bums. they dont get it either.