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Broken Clocks (2/8)

Aug 22, 2009 00:31

Title: Broken Clocks (2/8)
Author: stormwolf10

Rating: Teen
Characters: Ten, Rose, Mickey, Madame de Pompadour
Word Count: 1181
Summary: A fairly routine first trip for a new companion turns into a hard lesson for the Doctor about love.
Spoilers: Through The Girl in the Fireplace
Authors Notes: Written for the Time In Flux fic-a-thon. I have to admit, when I ( Read more... )

Comments 3

lorelaisquared August 22 2009, 19:59:32 UTC

Oh, I love how you get into the Doctor's head here: What was happening to him? He hadn't felt this way since...since...a moment while tinkering with the TARDIS, as he looked up to find another beautiful blond standing over him. Rose. Think of her. This isn't right, but... I love the way you've woven in his confusion and resistance and how you've brought it back to Rose.

I also love this: His mind rebelled, screaming about betrayal, Great additions! :)

stormwolf10 August 24 2009, 05:15:25 UTC

It's a strange thing I do with my favorite shows. I start psychoanalyzing the characters. The Doctor most of all. :)

I couldn't possibly imagine that he'd be completely oblivious to the fact that Rose loves him, and he so obviously loves her, and has done since practically the beginning. I figured his conscience would be kicking at him for falling for Reinette instead of being with Rose, and him not quite understanding why he's falling for Reinette.

lorelaisquared August 24 2009, 06:09:36 UTC

Yes, very good reasonings. Like I said, I really liked how you got into his head. :)