Change (prequel to Unbalance)

[stormy_words]

Title: Change (Prequel to Unbalance)
Author: saturn_necklace/stormy_wordsPairing/group: Hinted future Ohno/Nino

Comments

[crafty381]

hi there!i just want to say that you write beautifully. the imagery and feelings you evoked with your words are really vivid. i can picture them clearly in my head and feel them =)also, i love the plot, i love the characterization and i love that it's long c",)really excited for the sequel, will be waiting patiently for it :D

and, good luck on your exams *___*

[saturn_necklace]

:D Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, since I was a little worried that it would end up being too different to the main fic, or something.

Hopefully I won't take too long to finish the sequel - I want to get it up by the end of may at leas, but I don't know whether that'll happen, since it's set to be quite a bit longer than this part.

Thank you :D!

[arashixdream]

Thanks for continuing with Unbalance ^^ It's a wonderful story =) I love ohmiya's parts and the whole story, is like watching a movie or read a book =D

[saturn_necklace]

:D I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading!

[elleipsis]

This is so beautiful. I loved Unbalence a lot, and any story that is in that universe is great. I like how we learnt more about how they developed their magic, and how their personalities shaped it, or maybe it is the other way around. The way that Sho was mothering, and gentle, Nino's different personalities, Ohno's specialness of just drifting away, Jun with his possibly dark temper, and Aiba wanting to do the best he could with swords.

The little things, and the development between Ohno and Nino was really lovely to read.
Thank you very much for writing this, I can't wait to read the sequel when you get the time to write it!
Best of luck with your exams! Thanks ♥

[saturn_necklace]

This part was definitely more focussed on giving more insight into their backgrounds, since I got the feeling that that was one of the things that didn't seem to come across in Unbalance. I'm glad you thought I was succesful in giving at least a little bit more insight into it! :D

Hopefully the sequel won't be too far off; I want to get it done at least by the end of May, but whether I'll manage that or not is another question - the sequel's set to be a fair bit longer than this part, after all.

Thank you, and I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

[cariad_82]

there is not m uch I can say about this! Just Wonderful, great, awesome!!!

Love it ^_^

*going to read unbalanced now*

[saturn_necklace]

:D I'm glad you liked it! Hopefully you'll enjoy Unbalance just as much, if not more ♥

[mujun]

So lovely. You've created such a real place. :)

[saturn_necklace]

:D I'm glad you think so - I know that I can imagine all the places very clearly, but I couldn't be sure whether other people could or not. It's good to know that the setting seems real :D