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037 :: Take Aim :: YunChunChul :: R

Jun 13, 2006 00:52

Title: Take Aim
Author: Jei
Rating: R
Pairing: YunChunChul
Genre: AU/Angst
Summary: Loaded God complex, cock it and pull it.
Comments: jian__dan__ai...don't hate me. >>;

( Take Aim )

Comments 11

hoyah June 13 2006, 05:00:33 UTC

;o; ZOMG POOR ALL THREE OF THEM! T_T

story_by_number June 13 2006, 05:02:18 UTC

Indeed. XD

hoyah June 13 2006, 05:08:49 UTC

oddly, i felt more for chul than anyone else in this fic. it's probably because the focus is on him and he just seems so...helpless. also, to hear yunho saying those last words... ;^; wangst

story_by_number June 13 2006, 05:27:05 UTC

Well yeah...somehow that's how it turned out to be. It was meant to be based on YunChun only but ended up that HeeChul!ficmuse wormed in there and wanted pity. 8,D

Thread 5

thoughtless June 13 2006, 05:15:41 UTC

-feels sorry for heechul only whu? XD:-

story_by_number June 13 2006, 05:27:32 UTC

Somehow...that ended up the purpose of the fic. o_o;

Any constructive criticism?

thoughtless June 13 2006, 05:31:32 UTC

hmm..write longer or possibly just more indepth? D: cause the death of YooChun didn't leave any impact on me really and the only reason I felt for Chun was cause he had to hear the words Yunho said at the end. Sorta just like flipping through the channels and skipping a random show where someone got shot and changing still cause there was nothing really felt behind it. :x

quiet_morning June 13 2006, 05:38:20 UTC

chunnie!!!!!!

gado June 13 2006, 08:23:21 UTC

\(;_;)/
yunchun died!

poor yunho! and heechul! and.. well.. yoochun is dead so not so much poor him, but a little ^.^

missnhaca June 15 2006, 04:00:59 UTC

Oh God. -feels sickened- This hurt a lot more than I thought it would. :x