Debt (Chapter 11)

[storynerd101]

Title: Debt
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: FrostIron
Warnings: Some violence
Spoilers: Not for Avengers
Summary: Tony Stark shouldn't find Loki fascinating, but he does, because all he’s ever wanted to do is take things apart to see how they work. Besides, he’s never been any good at following the rules. 
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Comments

[scyllaya]

Oh Tony, you have a bad tendency to get hurt in your suit. Ouch.

[storynerd101]

Him and his damn heroics. Although, at least he's a little less injured than he would be without the suit XD

[tygerc]

Sunday?! How can you be this evil?!

[storynerd101]

Haha I'm sorry! You can hold on that far I'm sure :) Besides it gives me time to actually edit the next chapter because whoops I haven't done that yet XD

[maverikloki]

...you almost gave me a heart attack with that author's note. *__*

Evil cliffhanger is evil, but I suppose I deserve it after all my evil cliffhangers. Gripping chapter, as always. One tiiiiiny critique: long paragraphs like the first one are hard to read, especially if your attention span is as short as mine. I'd suggest breaking it up into smaller chunks next time.

I hope Loki comes to Tony's rescue! ^____^

[storynerd101]

Haha I couldn't miss the opportunity to mess around a little, sorry XD

I did think that paragraph was running on a little, but I couldn't find a great place to cut it - in future I'll try to avoid that (especially posting here - it looks a lot more wall-of-text than I realised!)