Now What? ~ Chapter Two ~ ''Breakfast''

Aug 12, 2010 15:55


Author's note: Chapter two! Just one question this time: do you like the new design? Oh, and, this chapter is dedicated to My Crazy Head! Why? Because she's awesome! And yes, I put her name into a link. You know what that means, right? Go read her story! No, wait! First read and enjoy this chapter, then go read her stuff. :D 
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rubystone77 August 12 2010, 23:43:33 UTC
WOW! Alice's parents need to get a freaking clue! It's like they have no concept of what their daughter is going through nor do they have the desire to at least attempt to understand. It's really sad but it's mostly sad for them! They don't know what a fantastic daughter that they have. A person is so much more than their physical limitations! To not even bother trying to enjoy the wonders of her mind is just pathetic as a parent! They need to wake up!

I really hope that you're real family is nothing like this because from everything I've read that you put out the people around you need to know how wonderfully your mind works! AWESOME Writing!

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storyteller1010 August 13 2010, 05:40:45 UTC
Yeah, they do.

I know I created them as character's, but man, do I hate them! :S

Nah, my family/parents are nothing like that. They're always supportive and I know that I can always talk with them about anything and no matter what I do/think/say, I know they're gonna stand by my side (:

Thanks :D

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rubystone77 August 13 2010, 13:31:18 UTC
That's so good to know. You really have to have a good support system to go through something like that :)

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storyteller1010 August 13 2010, 13:40:31 UTC
Yeah, it makes the whole experience so much easier!

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storyteller1010 August 13 2010, 08:21:34 UTC
Man, I make everyone cry :O

You're not the only one. As I was writing the talk between Alice and her parents, I was getting SO angry! Weird, or what? o.o

*hugs Blair and offers a tissue* :D

Cool :D

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storyteller1010 August 13 2010, 08:28:51 UTC
:D

Yeah. Thank God my parents are awesome xD

Ahaha, yeah, I think I'll pass :P

O.O

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storyteller1010 August 13 2010, 09:51:44 UTC
Thanks ^^

Don't worry, we all hate them :P

Thank you. And I'm from Croatia :D

I will (:

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alexavo_thesims August 13 2010, 10:24:27 UTC
Wow! Great Chapter :D
I kinda felt sorry for her parents at first, because Alice was never that nice to them, but know I realise that the are idiots! They should try and help her in whichever way they can! :)
But I also think Alice shouldn't give up so easily, she should think positive! Not find the downside in every situation like she usually does. Least she has parents, some people don't :(
Oh and I agree with what rihannahrated_r said :D

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storyteller1010 August 13 2010, 10:53:01 UTC
Thanks :D

LOL, yes, they are idiots :P

Yeah, I guess you're right.

^^

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gem_gemmy August 13 2010, 14:09:59 UTC
Another good chapter, still sad of course, but this time in a different way. I'm not sure how to describd it, and I've never been good writing commments so I'll have to cut it short there.

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storyteller1010 August 13 2010, 14:15:51 UTC
:D

Thanks!

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storyteller1010 August 17 2010, 05:31:51 UTC
Mine or Gem's? :D

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