Now What? ~ Chapter Five ~ ''A Number''

[storyteller1010]

''Since it's obvious we don't work out together all to good, your father and I decided it would be for the best if you'd spend some time at your Grandmother's. Seeing that your school ended a week ago, you will spend the entire summer vacation at Toronto, with Hannah, your Grandma.''

With that said, she looked at me, patiently awaiting my reaction

Comments

[marijuly12]

OMG.... what number!?!?!

Oh, and I think Alice's Emo part got control over a tiny bit too much, she deserved the slap. I mean I'm sorry to say it this way. Sure be mad at the world, but is it her parents fault that they are trying to treat her like a normal kid? No... she didn't have any right to say the things she said.

[storyteller1010]

^^

Lol, Alice doesn't have an 'Emo part' and she's certainly not mad at the world. She said that because her mother acted to her like she was a pet who will obey her rules, and from Alice's point she sees it as if they wanna get rid of her, just to make it easier for them. And she's mad at life, not world. The world didn't make her this way, life and nature did.

[gem_gemmy]

Whoa.

Another great chapter, of course. And 'whoa' really was all I could think of this time! I wanna know what the number is now! Keep writing!

And on a sidenote, I've updated my story.

[storyteller1010]

Thanks! :D

YES! Gonna go read it in a couple of hours, my mother wants to read my blog even though she did that like 10 times >.> *sigh*

[anonymous]

She called Matt, she HAD to have called Matt !

I really hate her parents, but I can't believe she said that O.o She kinda did deserve the slap though : /

Aww, Ana. What's wrong???
I really hope you're okay :(((

[storyteller1010]

Ah...you will see ;)

Well, you see, from Alice's point of the view she sees the whole 'leaving to Grandma's' thing as if they wanna get rid of her, just to make it easier for them. And Alice thinks her mother doesn't have the right to treat her like a pet with the whole 'you will do what we say' 'cus she didn't care for her before. Hope that explains her little speech :P

I'm sick, and on top of that I'm in my 'I'm pissed off and sad because of OI and if you look at me...well just remember that if looks could kill you'd be dead' mood. Yesterday I cried because of the possiblity what COULD happen in the future. Weird or what?

[nikkstarrr11]

:O I dislike that mother so much.
She has just made my list.
How dare she slap Alice?!

I'm thinking the number will be either for Grandma Hannah or the guy she was talking to the other chapter (blame my horrid memory for that; the name eludes me. I do apologize D:)

[storyteller1010]

Haha! :P

XD
It's Matthew/Matt/Renegade360...which ever is easier for you. :D
We will see ^^

[rubystone77]

This is awesome. I feel so sorry for poor Alice.

[storyteller1010]

Thanks.