Now What? ~ Chapter Ten ~ Final Chapter ~ ''Darkness & Light''

[storyteller1010]

After some time, the door opened, and I heard footsteps before something hit the floor and the person who came runned to me.
''Alice? Alice! Alice?!''
I could hear Eric's panicked voice echoing in the hallway but it seemed so distant. He grabbed my left arm and shooked it slightly, but since I didn't show any signs of life he pressed two of his

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Chapter 3

[ext_243279]

Chapter 3 is up!!! :D :D :D :D

Re: Chapter 3

[storyteller1010]

Cool! I'm gonna go read now!

[storyteller1010]

I knowww! I'm sad too! :'(

Mattio? LOL! Well, okay. Whatever floats your boat! :D

I actually thought about that... There's gonna be another story now, unrelated to Alice, but later on... who knows... ;)

[storyteller1010]

*passes tissue*

LOL, that's awesome! I have a online friend and every time we chat I tell him I'm gonna beat the crap out of him when I come to my Grandma's (he lives a city next to one where my Grandma does.) It's kinda of a inside joke by now. He always asks me when I'll come and beat him. ^^ Online friends are a pure epic win, are they not? :3

Alice shall come. Don't worry. But now I have this story in my head. Maybe I'll toss Alice & Matt in it if I can. ^^

Yay

[anonymous]

I love the seris and i am SOOOOO glad u didnt kill off Alice or make her commimet sueaside(i kno a have bad spelling)And i didnt kno that Matt was elevtor boy!
plz write more stories

~zoyezoom1435

Re: Yay

[storyteller1010]

Thanks. ^^

You didn't? :P

It's okay with the bad spelling. I myself have English as my second (or third, if you count German which I learn in school but still suck at it) language and it's certainly hard to write on a different language than the one you speak and use everyday. :)

Don't worry, I will. ;)

Re: Yay

[storyteller1010]

Croatian. It's hard to people who don't speak it because it has letters like č, ć, ž, š, đ, dž, lj, nj. I also learn German in school (I couldn't choose, I had to learn it from the first grade -.-) but I still suck at it. :D

[ext_243279]

That would be amazing if you put me in your links. I would be honored! :D

[storyteller1010]

Okay, cool, I'll do it now. ^^

[rubystone77]

That was cheesy but awesome. Your original idea was very sad but I'm sure it would have been as gut wrenching awesome as the rest of the story has been. It'll be sad not to have any more of Alice and the crew but honestly I'm looking forward to what you might have in store next.

[storyteller1010]

Yeah, I know, I hate cheesy stories and now I made one. >.>

Thanks!

That means a lot to me. ^^