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[storytellinf3wl]

Your words of promise were such beautiful
notes to me, a windchime's sweet song,
but its sparkling light
now hurts my eyes
and I can see right through.
Oh, it was such a charming tune...
too bad it had no meaning.

I can't think of a title......bah.....it's short.....double bah....lalalalala

Ashley

Comments

[storytellinf3wl]

Yea......just a note, I spaced this really funky/crappy but I'm too lazy to go and fix it...for now.

DUN DUN DUN!

[bipbophiphop]

haha, nice note :D

i don't really understand the poem, but it sounds pretty! ;) lol

[sunlesstravels]

wonderful wonderful! too bad thats the way things really are....

[storytellinf3wl]

Yeah, the fact that what I wrote is pretty much true sucks quite a lot.... =(