Title: Fresh Feeling
Pairing: Kaisoo
Genre: band!canon
Rating: PG
Length: 3,235 words (oneshot)
Summary: Showtime fanservice hits Kyungsoo a little too close to home. Everyone has a hyung.
Notes: My first fic! Title taken from the song by The Eels. Lyrics excerpt from Radiohead's "House of Cards."
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great job on your first fic (screw it it's so wonderful that i am rendered retarded and incoherent do u feel me) /( .□.)\ ︵╰(゜益゜)╯︵ /(.□. /) THIS IS SO GOOD OKAY I'M NOT EVEN KIDDING.
"Stop touching him," Jongin replies, and he crooks his elbow over Kyungsoo's neck, locking the older boy closer to his side. Sehun rolls his eyes and makes obnoxious kissy faces at Kyungsoo (who only rolls his eyes farther back in response). The little devil cozies up to Joonmyun instead, who absentmindedly ruffles his hair and tells him to watch his language.
i l o v e how you described Jongin pulling Kyungsoo closer to his side ermagod and sehun that little shit (god the way he goes to the other hyung when Kyungsoo becomes unavailable is just too cute).
o(≧∇≦o) (o≧∇≦)o kaisoo o(≧∇≦o) (o≧∇≦)o kaisoo o(≧∇≦o) (o≧∇≦)o kaisoo o(≧∇≦o) (o≧∇≦)o
But Kyungsoo feels the uncanny sensation of seeing his friend for the first time, really seeing him--and ( ... )
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And just an overall response to all your lovely side comments = gotta love Kaisoo!! It's really painless writing the dynamic between them since they always seem to watch out for each other and seek out each other's approval and /care/. They give a girl so much raw material to work with <3
Anyway, thanks again for stopping by and for all your kind words. You just made my day!
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Thank you, thank you, for all your compliments! I feel so spoiled. I haven't cross-posted this anywhere else, so it's kind of hidden in this journal. But I'm glad you came across it somehow, like maybe...8 other people? :P
And yes, I love how Kaisoo manages to be so affectionate yet so discreet. They have such a natural relationship, and I think that's what makes them so irresistible. And btw, I ship Krisoo :P I didn't at first, but then I read a handful of wonderful fics with them as the main pairing, and I just couldn't help myself. Give 'em a try! xx
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I'm just... I LOVE IT AMD I LOVE YOU OMG
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Thank youuuu <3 And here's another <3 for being so nice.
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And thank you a lot, it's just a great fic ^^
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