Fresh Feeling

Feb 08, 2014 16:19

Title: Fresh Feeling
Pairing: Kaisoo
Genre: band!canon
Rating: PG
Length: 3,235 words (oneshot)
Summary: Showtime fanservice hits Kyungsoo a little too close to home. Everyone has a hyung.
Notes: My first fic! Title taken from the song by The Eels. Lyrics excerpt from Radiohead's "House of Cards."

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fresh feeling, genre: non au, fandom: exo, rating: pg, fanfic, genre: canon, pairing: kai/kyungsoo, genre: romance, kaisoo, genre: fluff

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blobsofgrey March 16 2014, 09:24:15 UTC
wjrkgehdsak5huigeabjkqryueqtgwbj gahhh what what what /flails and screams and thrashes around/

great job on your first fic (screw it it's so wonderful that i am rendered retarded and incoherent do u feel me) /( .□.)\ ︵╰(゜益゜)╯︵ /(.□. /) THIS IS SO GOOD OKAY I'M NOT EVEN KIDDING.

"Stop touching him," Jongin replies, and he crooks his elbow over Kyungsoo's neck, locking the older boy closer to his side. Sehun rolls his eyes and makes obnoxious kissy faces at Kyungsoo (who only rolls his eyes farther back in response). The little devil cozies up to Joonmyun instead, who absentmindedly ruffles his hair and tells him to watch his language.

i l o v e how you described Jongin pulling Kyungsoo closer to his side ermagod and sehun that little shit (god the way he goes to the other hyung when Kyungsoo becomes unavailable is just too cute).

o(≧∇≦o) (o≧∇≦)o kaisoo o(≧∇≦o) (o≧∇≦)o kaisoo o(≧∇≦o) (o≧∇≦)o kaisoo o(≧∇≦o) (o≧∇≦)o

But Kyungsoo feels the uncanny sensation of seeing his friend for the first time, really seeing him--and ( ... )

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strange_seas March 16 2014, 11:28:27 UTC
WOW. Thank you sooooo much for this humongous comment slash compliment! I'm still kind of absorbing it, tbh :o I wasn't very confident in this fic since it was my first, so I haven't shared it anywhere else, but I'm so happy you found it and enjoyed yourself! Your feels are beyond flattering to me :)

And just an overall response to all your lovely side comments = gotta love Kaisoo!! It's really painless writing the dynamic between them since they always seem to watch out for each other and seek out each other's approval and /care/. They give a girl so much raw material to work with <3

Anyway, thanks again for stopping by and for all your kind words. You just made my day!

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blobsofgrey March 17 2014, 13:22:44 UTC
how can you not be confident ermagod (ꈨຶꎁꈨຶ)۶” yiss kaisoo kills me over and over again how am i even alive i know not why. you're welcome hurrhurr.

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strange_seas March 17 2014, 17:22:24 UTC
So sweet! ~

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incrediblyhappy March 25 2014, 12:51:39 UTC
(HOW COME I ONLY FOUND THIS NOW ( ... )

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strange_seas March 26 2014, 18:31:55 UTC
Oh, hello again. I just replied to your comment in my other post, and lo and behold, another pleasant surprise here~

Thank you, thank you, for all your compliments! I feel so spoiled. I haven't cross-posted this anywhere else, so it's kind of hidden in this journal. But I'm glad you came across it somehow, like maybe...8 other people? :P

And yes, I love how Kaisoo manages to be so affectionate yet so discreet. They have such a natural relationship, and I think that's what makes them so irresistible. And btw, I ship Krisoo :P I didn't at first, but then I read a handful of wonderful fics with them as the main pairing, and I just couldn't help myself. Give 'em a try! xx

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peanut133 March 25 2014, 22:06:28 UTC
So fluffy and cute and utterly a amazing
I'm just... I LOVE IT AMD I LOVE YOU OMG

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strange_seas March 26 2014, 18:00:07 UTC
/blushes

Thank youuuu <3 And here's another <3 for being so nice.

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lotusk March 31 2014, 10:35:03 UTC
This is so unbelievably perfect TT.TT the yearning, the pining, the friendship and more than friendship and just thank you for writing this beautiful story ;;_;;

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strange_seas March 31 2014, 12:50:56 UTC
Oh my, thank you! I'm touched~ Like I said in my previous comments, I don't know how you found this since it's kind of my hidden(?) fic, but I'm so pleased you did :P

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lotusk March 31 2014, 13:26:08 UTC
Oh I didn't realize it was hidden otl. Someone on my tlist rec'ed it and I'm glad I clicked on the link because it's just lovely.

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strange_seas April 1 2014, 01:21:08 UTC
Haha no no by "hidden" I meant it's just buried in this little journal of mine :) It's not a private post or anything, I just haven't cross-posted it anywhere ^^

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tentori April 5 2014, 11:44:13 UTC
Awww, so lovely and cute ♥
And thank you a lot, it's just a great fic ^^

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strange_seas April 6 2014, 02:28:44 UTC
Thanks so much for the compliment! <3

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