This was amazing and so beautifully written! I loved every character but Sehun here is so perfect I fell in love with him too! Their love story was so beautiful even if Jongin was so oblivious but at the end they got together! Really and awesome piece of work!
Okay this was so beautiful???? I literally don't know how to comment on a fic like this wow I'm a mess.
The development and the way you described everything and how Jongin came to realize his feelings was so spot on I wanted to squeal (which okay I did at some parts) and just bless your soul for writing something like this.
"Who knows," he manages to say, just before Jongin tackles him to the wall with a bear hug. JONGIN HOW COULD YOU NOT KNOW
Not even gonna lie, I almost cried when Jongin heard Sehun and Yixing but then again I was like okay no this is what's going to push him to realize his feelings eVERYTHING IS OKAY even though I definitely was not okay.
The confession had me all over the place and the smut was A++++++ and the ending couldn't have been better ugh seriously I'll never get over this fic.
I'm honestly incapable of leaving proper comments but thank you for writing something so amazing ;u;
Oh please, I love the way you write comments! They always seem so candid and spontaneous and filled with genuine emotion <3
"Who knows," he manages to say, just before Jongin tackles him to the wall with a bear hug." -- ^.^
I had to take a whole day's break after writing the SeXing because it honestly stressed me out? Huhu @ that compliment re: the ~sexy stuff~...I bashed that out in one go and never looked back, lest I accidentally-on-purpose deleted the whole scene...
You know what I'll never get over? How nice you are to me T__T Thank you for always reading to the very end and never failing to leave such positive feedback :)
aww.. this is sooo good!!!! 94-liners for the win!! you never really disappoint! everything is sooo flawless! i love you! i love chanyeol-sooyoung's dynamics. you made them very adorable!! and i like that joomyun didn't lead jongin on but he just really see jongin as a hoobae/friend.
and trust chanyeol to be the one blabbering of your most kept secret. lol. i laughed at that scene. seriously. good thing that outcome turned for the better.
happy new year, author-nim! (im sorry, i only got to read this now.) thank you for another lovely story. i always enjoy your writing and look forward to more. :)
Aw, I've always thought Chanyeol would make such an amazing boyfriend (once he gets over his woman-shy phase, that is) so it's easy for me to pair him up with girls in my stories <3 And yes, trust Chanyeol to blurt out a spoiler right when you need him to!
I'm glad you were satisfied with Joonmyun's character arc, too. I find that he's always the one jilted/rejected/pining away in a lot of fics, so I wanted to sort of turn him into the one that got away in this one :P
In any case, it warms my heart to hear that the story lived up to your expectations! Thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to comment. I'm always happy to see you :)
The way you describe their closeness and relationship that they know each other's behavior and mannerism so well, it is very well written. It is surprising that even knowing each other so well, Jongin didn't notice or realise that Sehun loves him or that he loved Sehun all this while.
YOU MADE ME WANT TO SOB AND WAIL IN MY BED AFTER I HAF FINISHED READING THIS.
I really like your writing style, it was so well flowing that I didn't even think I was reading a fic. I literally got just so into this that it played in my head like a movie and it just went on so smoothly I'm seriously amazed. I love it when there are authors like you who know their way around words so well that there is not a single sentence that would make the reading experience any less amazing. There were no awkward parts, just pure golden flawlessness with an awesome plot and most importantly, sekai. Thank you for writing sekai, there is never enough sekai.
Jongin was so slow, I was losing my mind because they were already acting like boyfriends and during the first part when Jongin bit Sehun's shoulder and then kissed him on the cheek I went crazy because damn it, just realize your feelings. The build up was so sweet and I loved their friendship in this and just them in general because they were both such sweethearts and oh my god just how long
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You've made it really difficult for me to formulate a response to your comment. What incredible feedback. Makes a girl think...is this really for me???
Believe me when I say that the slow, slow, s l o w buildup before Jongin breaks out of oblivion made me lose my mind, too. It took 10 weeks to write this (I think?) and each week felt like a race towards the "good parts," even though those only came at the very end. So, yeah, that emotional wreck factor? SPOT ON.
I also wanted to express how glad I am to be hearing from someone who loves Sekai! They're one of my shadow ships, and I've lowkey mentioned them in some of my other stories, but I've always, always wanted to devote an entire fic to their bestfriendship. I just couldn't figure out the proper way to do it until now. So, from the bottom of my heart, thank you so much for the feedback! I was a bit nervous about how my first Sekai would fare, but reading this precious thing made all the sleepless nights worth it <333333333
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This was amazing and so beautifully written!
I loved every character but Sehun here is so perfect I fell in love with him too!
Their love story was so beautiful even if Jongin was so oblivious but at the end they got together!
Really and awesome piece of work!
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The development and the way you described everything and how Jongin came to realize his feelings was so spot on I wanted to squeal (which okay I did at some parts) and just bless your soul for writing something like this.
"Who knows," he manages to say, just before Jongin tackles him to the wall with a bear hug. JONGIN HOW COULD YOU NOT KNOW
Not even gonna lie, I almost cried when Jongin heard Sehun and Yixing but then again I was like okay no this is what's going to push him to realize his feelings eVERYTHING IS OKAY even though I definitely was not okay.
The confession had me all over the place and the smut was A++++++ and the ending couldn't have been better ugh seriously I'll never get over this fic.
I'm honestly incapable of leaving proper comments but thank you for writing something so amazing ;u;
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"Who knows," he manages to say, just before Jongin tackles him to the wall with a bear hug." -- ^.^
I had to take a whole day's break after writing the SeXing because it honestly stressed me out? Huhu @ that compliment re: the ~sexy stuff~...I bashed that out in one go and never looked back, lest I accidentally-on-purpose deleted the whole scene...
You know what I'll never get over? How nice you are to me T__T Thank you for always reading to the very end and never failing to leave such positive feedback :)
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brb after i read another one of your masterpieces.
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you never really disappoint! everything is sooo flawless! i love you!
i love chanyeol-sooyoung's dynamics. you made them very adorable!!
and i like that joomyun didn't lead jongin on but he just really see jongin as a hoobae/friend.
and trust chanyeol to be the one blabbering of your most kept secret. lol. i laughed at that scene. seriously. good thing that outcome turned for the better.
happy new year, author-nim! (im sorry, i only got to read this now.) thank you for another lovely story.
i always enjoy your writing and look forward to more. :)
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I'm glad you were satisfied with Joonmyun's character arc, too. I find that he's always the one jilted/rejected/pining away in a lot of fics, so I wanted to sort of turn him into the one that got away in this one :P
In any case, it warms my heart to hear that the story lived up to your expectations! Thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to comment. I'm always happy to see you :)
Happy New Year! xxxxxxx
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I like the pace and the flow of it.
The way you describe their closeness and relationship that they know each other's behavior and mannerism so well, it is very well written. It is surprising that even knowing each other so well, Jongin didn't notice or realise that Sehun loves him or that he loved Sehun all this while.
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YOU MADE ME WANT TO SOB AND WAIL IN MY BED AFTER I HAF FINISHED READING THIS.
I really like your writing style, it was so well flowing that I didn't even think I was reading a fic. I literally got just so into this that it played in my head like a movie and it just went on so smoothly I'm seriously amazed. I love it when there are authors like you who know their way around words so well that there is not a single sentence that would make the reading experience any less amazing. There were no awkward parts, just pure golden flawlessness with an awesome plot and most importantly, sekai. Thank you for writing sekai, there is never enough sekai.
Jongin was so slow, I was losing my mind because they were already acting like boyfriends and during the first part when Jongin bit Sehun's shoulder and then kissed him on the cheek I went crazy because damn it, just realize your feelings. The build up was so sweet and I loved their friendship in this and just them in general because they were both such sweethearts and oh my god just how long ( ... )
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You've made it really difficult for me to formulate a response to your comment. What incredible feedback. Makes a girl think...is this really for me???
Believe me when I say that the slow, slow, s l o w buildup before Jongin breaks out of oblivion made me lose my mind, too. It took 10 weeks to write this (I think?) and each week felt like a race towards the "good parts," even though those only came at the very end. So, yeah, that emotional wreck factor? SPOT ON.
I also wanted to express how glad I am to be hearing from someone who loves Sekai! They're one of my shadow ships, and I've lowkey mentioned them in some of my other stories, but I've always, always wanted to devote an entire fic to their bestfriendship. I just couldn't figure out the proper way to do it until now. So, from the bottom of my heart, thank you so much for the feedback! I was a bit nervous about how my first Sekai would fare, but reading this precious thing made all the sleepless nights worth it <333333333
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