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tov01 October 25 2014, 19:17:02 UTC
Yay! Another Chapter! *Goes off to read*

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tov01 October 25 2014, 20:26:57 UTC
Don't do it, Ophelia! *wrings hands*

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mdpthatsme October 25 2014, 19:35:34 UTC
A pool! That can never be a good thing!

Oh Johnny :(
Where the hell is Ripp?

I love the exchanges between Tank and Frances. Tank sure has grown up :)

LOOK FORWARD TO MORE!

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anonymous October 25 2014, 20:38:28 UTC
Oh Gosh a new chapter exactly on my birthday!
Oh no!
I hope Ophelia is not going to do what she is seeming she's going to do...
Where's Ripp?

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tay_dw October 25 2014, 22:21:04 UTC
Was... Was Ophelia about to kill herself? She still has Rip. Speaking of which (as everyone else is) I also wonder where Ripp is, but I'm sure his portion is probably gonna take up like most or even all of the next update.
Also, wheres Beau? Whats up with him?

So many questions. I can't wait for part 2

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timberwolfoz October 25 2014, 22:59:22 UTC
Oh, wow. So many intriguing narrative threads.

I'm glad Lola is going with Johnny - at least he'll have a) someone he knows and b) family there.

Intriguing, Jill wanting to travel - I like the tie-in to the ocean.

Nice to see the Tank and Frances bit. Have you given Franny new eyes?

But where are Ripp and Buck? And oh shit, Ophelia! *bites nails*

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